摘要
Alvaro Cortez, a gifted young footballer from the humble suburb of Valle Sol, dreams of playing for Blanco Royal FC, one of the most prestigious football clubs in Europe. Growing up idolizing legends and training on dusty fields.
'GOAT: Against All Odds' is the journey of Alvaro the boy with dreams to becoming a famous footballer, One of the greatest.
As Alvaro navigates the highs and lows of his ascent, he faces critical moments of failure, redemption, and growth. Along the way, he learns that greatness isn’t achieved alone—it requires the support of teammates, mentors, and an unwavering determination to overcome setbacks.
This is a story of ambition, resilience, and self-discovery, chronicling Alvaro Cortez’s journey from a small-town dreamer to a rising star in the world of football. Set against the backdrop of intense rivalries, personal sacrifices, and the relentless pursuit of excellence, it’s a tale of what it takes to rise to the top and stay there.
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The story would sometimes be fast paced or slow according to the situations.
System = check ✅
Critical Injury = check ✅
( nb : predictable,i mean don't we have a system to introduce)
Romance = check ✅
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So the system part of the story wouldn't start until quit some time.You know, I don't want anyone to criticize my guy saying he can't do sh*t without system so.And the clubs and players are inspired from irl and i won't use the real names or anything,Cause I don't want any complications later(IYKYk).
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I've always wanted to read a pure football novel with realistic gameplay and without any stealing abilities, cheat scifi or fantasy and this just might be it only issue I have with the novel is with starting in a unknown team in an unknown league but I would say the game management is spot on as a aspiring writer I understand hwo hard it is to keep consistency while trying to attract readers which is why I would be rating it a 4.4
sorry for this shameless review, but as the author i have to do this ,you know. Also pls share your reviews too.you don't have to be shameless like me :) or maybe you can right? now the starting chapters are'nt that perfect but i can it'll improves as story goes on and as a sports based one there maybe people who are not able understand many things like the game actions ,sadly there's nothing i can do about that .
I think this is good for now, Story progress is too little so i can't say for sure.