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Teen gets send to the pokemon world inside the body Ash Ketchum. Of course system, the game shark system, but could only use the shop in the system since its pokemon no reason for him to be op. Sorry for the grammar and I just wait till my favorite author keeps updating their novels until then I just writing this for fun. Release date when I can remember to put them into web novel mostly they are waiting in my folder in my computer, steadily increasing. Please be confused with me along the journey, following the pokemon anime and pokemon game so copy and paste justu is active beware and tell me when I mess up in the comment section, mostly all the time, so I could go back and fix them.
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saya harap disini tidak ada adegan haremnya yah dan berbagai pengembangan ceritanya di kembangkan oh dan stabilitas pwmbaruanya juga yang dipercepat lagi (kalau ada waktunya)
He was supposed to already be a teenager, and a fan of pokemon He caught and trained some pokemon before canon? Fine. However... On the day his pokemon trip start, most of his knowledge about pokemon and the plot is gone, as well as his previous life experience. So much that I don't see the point of the whole reincarnation point Disappointing
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
I like the original concept... However the MC is a doormat, the cheats are practically non existent and only the last chapter, chapter 14 has one. Pickachu is still an ass and is practically misty her pokemon now. The MC keeps getting abused and used by misty. Honestly the whole thing makes you wonder when it will be any fun from start to finish..
I honestly cant read more, I tried, I got up to chapter 8 and my brain couldn't take it, I am going to be perfectly honest, I am sure you are not a native english speaker and I respect you for writing outside of your comfort zone, but you really need help with grammar and punctuation, you are missing almost every quotation mark in the story. Its hard to transition between speaking and background info when there isn't a clear divide between the two, my recommendation, use grammarly or even Microsoft Word spell check, there is a huge amount of resources online that are free, use them, see where you go wrong and use that to improve. good luck