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An average man is reborn into Westeros. A land of dying magic, unknown lands and even, eventually, dragons.
But that isn't all. He soon finds that things are different.
With the gifts he was born with, watch as the man rises and rises, until he's at the top. Read as he goes from Prince Tommen, to King Tommen the Great.
(A/N - MC is reborn as the twin to Joffrey and is called Tommen. He also has the Super Soldier serum running through his veins.)
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I am actually kind of surprised. The quality of this book is unexpectedly good. I expected for the story to degrade as the plot continued bur oh, what a surprise I received. The emotions portrayed by the character, the descriptive scenes, and how the plot has developed till now has been fantastic and I can't wait to read more of this.
I am both surprised and delighted by your story. You are a much better writer than me, and I can't wait to read more. The story's pace is good. The characters feel like real people and aren't two dimensional. The fights are well written, and the writing style is surprisingly entertaining and fun all on its own. I rarely do reviews, but that's just how much I liked what I read so far. Only things I'd point out story wise to make the MC slightly more proactive. He's a prince and a strong fighter. But, he's still vulnerable to schemes and what not. His mere presence changes things, thats why sticking too closely to canon and waiting for events to happen isn't wise. Writing wise, I'd recommend inserting a few more POVs especially of characters like joffery and Cersi. I am just nitpicking by this point, but overall I'm quite happy buy what I have read so far.
There have been too many good Game of Thrones fan fictions that have been dropped or cancelled early on. Hopefully this goes on till the end.
Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.
Mc is strong, good humor, not bad romance. I hope it will harem. Recommend reading because it's best GoT fanfic I have seen so far. Even tho I didn't see much
It's a game of thrones character with a super-soldier serum. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET
Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.
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Your doing a great job so far and I've been enjoying it ☺️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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This is actually very good the writeing quality is amazing and You take time to show your charecters motivations and you also make these motivations the driveing force for the charecter in some famfics the charecter just does something without any motivations. you do well with this and actually hive your charecter real personality. i also like how you use different povs you dont overuse them you use them to bring to light certain story elements and guve attention to certain things instead of useing them for the sake of having a diffrent pesective.
I love this story. Please hope joffery also dies with robert. Hope joffery doesn't become king even for a day. I love this story. Please hope joffery also dies with robert. Hope joffery doesn't become king even for a day.
Don’t worry fellow sellswords, I was not forced or paid in any way to make this review. The quality of this fanfiction can not be explained and describe with a few mere words. This is more fine than the wine at the Red Wedding. - Ser Tyrone Lannister
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Im just happy you didn’t do the “3 wishes in game of thrones” trope where the dude is also a wizard and a demigod. Thank you for just giving the dude enhanced strength.
this novel is a hidden treasure for anyone who was wondering the dialogue fits and is also very funny at times I will say the Harem tag scares me because the relationship going on rn is so good and I'm worried more girls would ruin that aspect of the story but we'll have to wait and see I suppose
lo que no me gusta es el cambio de edades de los personajes , pero todo lo otro esta muy bien 👍.,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,.............................................
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I truly enjoy this story. The pacing of the story itself is done very well. The plot moves along in each chapter quick enough that it doesn’t feel like a slog and slow enough that I don’t feel like things are a blur. The design of the main character comes across well and he feels truly integrated into the world of Westeros. I also enjoyed his interactions with the characters so far and hope to see how his relationship with his grandfather and mother has developed in the future. The way you introduce things is also well done it is not info dumped onto you and feels natural. The story is still new so I can’t really gauge update stability yet. Once more the story is published I’ll be able to really tell if it develops well overtime. All in all my eyes have been blessed (Grammatically) compared to what I have seen and read on this site. Keep it up 👍🏾. P.S. I do have some questions. Will there be more OC’s and the story is tagged harem so how big are you going or have you changed you mind on that? Another is will you have other POV’s to give it that ASOIAF feel or mainly focus on Tomman? Just a final question how will Dorne factor into this (Arianne Martell??)? Regardless if you answer, good luck 🍀 and I hope this helps you grow as a writer if that is your passion. -Hmm...this is one of my rare reviews