/ Book&Literature / Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas
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Damian Silvius is reincarnated into the world of GOT/ASOIAF after meeting an unfortunate end in his previous world. Fortunately, he was born into the Stark Family as the fourth son and fifth youngest child of Rickard and Lyarra Stark. In addition to that, he bounded with a System that was similar to the game he like to play in his previous life.
(Will update the synopsis in a few days again)
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Tags related to R-18 content: Smut, Heavy sex, Threesome, Foursome, MFF, MMF and more, Group Sex, Orgy, Double Penetration, Incest, Lesbian, Interracial, Porn with Plot, etc. Mention of Gay, Bi sex for other Game of thrones characters (MC is a straight man)
Tags: Action, Magic, Medieval setting, Adventure, KIngdom-Building.
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It's like author have no idea how medieval world works. My review may be "wrong" because I only managed to read ten chapters
Thus is a very interesting story. Starting way before the game of thrones TV series time line since MC is the brother of the father of the original cast, he also has some powers to help him on his way. Very quickly in the story we find out that MC is a real adventure types and wants to see the whole world he is in now. While also having Magik powers starting him as a warg mage. And a real seafarer.
So far so good, hope for more,not really enough to really go on but not disappointed.
I'll be honest: the premise of this fanfic is good, but the overall story is bad. It almost feels like an AI wrote the entire thing. I wouldn't mind if the AI was good, but as I read, it uses so many unnecessary words that make me wonder if there was any human touch at all. Every word is predictable, and there is too much unnecessary detail. Sometimes, the author (or the AI) repeats themselves, which is frustrating. And now, they want us to pay to read AI-written work.
Me encantó la novela. Espero que continúes con la novela y la actualices rápido. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i think the novel is good for now and maybe it will only need time and more chapter to get betteri dont mind the harem in ancient times having a harem was very ordinary i hope the novel will have more chapter
Хорошое произведение, мне понравилось. Развитие сюжета на 5/5. Текст тоже хорошое 5/5. Система тоже нормальное, может козатся слишком ИМ, но только на первый взгляд 4/5.
Bastante bien. El sistema está bastante bien. Y la idea es interésante. Pero los primeros 20 capítulos son algo lentos. El protagonista tiene una personalidad rara.... Te cae bien en algunos capítulos y en otros no mucho.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
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Story development is good. I enjoy reading. I hope it continues to be updated. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Looking forwards to the rest. Mc has interesting perks that while powerful don't instantly place him over everyone else. I hope the story keeps the original emphasis of exploration and trade rather than him becoming a lord or even king...
As of now (chapter 27) i really like this, regular update and a good story... definitely recommend for someone who want to read a good GOT fanfic.
I gave it my all because of the amount of negative comments saying practically nothing, I'm not going to read it because many of the goals of this fic caught me, I don't know if they're all about the protagonist or just about other people... double discovery? If it's a casual encounter, that's fine... but the fear of being the heroine of the story takes away any desire to try, and I want this fic to appear in the review of everyone who made so many negative comments but said nothing at the same time.
Rating distribution — 3,3,2,4,3 I mainly disliked the story for naivety and softness of MC. He isn't suitable for GOT as his mindset and personality is too kind. And from experience I know the story will change itself to accomodate the MC not the other way around. So you can safely say it won't give the GOT vibe.