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Reincarnated as Jaehaerys Targaryen the son of Aerys, the mad king.
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The story is good if you can get past the grammar. The writing needs a lot of work, though.
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better than anything i can say.. i love it better than anything i can say.. i love it better than anything i can say.. i love it better than anything i can say.. i love it
Very nice! I hope you can see this fanfic to it's end and don't discontinue it. Seeing Aerys show love to anyone was an intresting moment. Good luck!
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Great read the story is great the writing style is sub par but the overall story makes it worth the pain. if you can improve your Grammer and get better at dialogs it will get 5 stars easy. keep up the good work.
la historia es interesante sin duda espero con ansias que lo sigas trayendo solo tengo la duda estu historia o la traduces no entendia muy bien eso pero es bueno la historia si es traducida me podiras desir el nombre dela obra original gracias
Keep going ! I like this novel!!Keep going ! I like this novel!! Keep going ! I like this novel!!Keep going ! I like this novel!! Keep going ! I like this novel!! Keep going ! I like this novel!!
in my opinion, the story is interesting, I hope the author will continue to post new chapters stable or warn that the story is on pause............................
Evaluation: Above Average WQ: Several grammatical errors which can be fix via grammarly. Make sure to always check your usage of pronounce. Well thought and long chapters. 3/5 SD: With slow to average pace of development without affecting the story & MC progression. 4/5 CD: MC isn't that OP with his chosen skills/blessings as the ability matches the power scale of ASOIF. 5/5 US: A stable update for an FF which is a plus. 5/5 WB: ASOIF, A decade before Roberts rebellion. I can't put the exact words yet as the story progression isn't that much. 5/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD