摘要
A man with questionable morals gains power over flesh. He bends and shapes it at his will. And while he may use his powers for good, there is always the possibility of him “healing” not just your body, but your mind for his pleasure.
So this is just me having some fun with a laid back story. I write for fun and this is my first time writing this type of story and character. This is not meant for children.
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honestly, I didn't have any idea how hooked I'd get on this story. Saw it and just passed it a few times not even bothering with it. well I finally gave in and kept reading till the most updated chapter without having it in my library, like I was captivated! don't miss out on this work and only hope it lasts for a good 50 to 100 chaps atleast. It's got a good start and great potential, can't wait for more! good job author.
Very interesting concept. It's good to see a story where a person isn't reborn into a noble house, where they have to truly work for things.
love an evil mc ......especially in got......love it ........need more updates...............😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
I liked the story so far, except the part of calling his woman as a pet, I never saw anyone who'd call a woman that he made himself as his ideal woman as a pet/animal. he treat her as a servant in a good way, he's very posessive about her, and that was goodn but it doesn't make any sense that he call her a pet!! refering to one of the women of your dreams as a pet is not a way to show that you love her, but rather that you view your crush as something equal to animals. So, Why. Do. You. Call. Her. A. Pet?? in the end I want to request that you stop calling her a pet, and you can refer to her as a servant 'at least something that is meant for a human', and if the book continue in a 'good way' I will post another 5 stars review.
Honestly even if it just started... it's way better than many game of thrones fanfics. keep up the amazing work and don't let the haters get to you.
Well, you know how it is. Gotta plug my own work, haha._____________________________________________________________________________________
Not bad. The moral decay of a person in such conditions and with such force is very well conveyed. It's nice to read about an ordinary person, not a hero or villain.
Tiene potencial. Tiene potencial. Tiene potencial. Tiene potencial. Tiene potencial. Tiene potencial. Tiene potencial. Tiene potencial. Tiene potencial.
I really like your idea of becoming the high septo. I've never seen it done before so thank you for it Hhhhhhhgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggttgggggggggghgggggggggggg
I didn't know what to think of this in the beginning, especially after the first fight with his two warriors. If I had written a review by then, I would probably have given you 2-3 stars, but since I decided to read all chapters before writing this, you managed to change my mind. The MC is by no means a good person. He is a coward in the beginning, but the character development is great, and he is starting to redeem himself.
His powers are interesting and I have yet to figure out it’s potential. I always look forward to new chapters of this novel, so give it a try!
This is for the author, I hate to say this because I like your books but it’s getting really annoying to start reading a new book like it then you stop and start yet a another new one please just choose one or 2 heck I don’t care if you do one chapter a month on it but please do keep droppin them.
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Excellent work. Keep it up. Awaiting your more frequent updates. ,.........,.........,...............,............,..........,.........,...
Reviewed at Chp14: WQ(5/5) - No major mistakes. Certainly not a dry and boring read, author makes sure to "show" the story from the MC's POV rather than explain which I find is more immersive. SD(5/5) - The author is taking a unique approach to the GoT story from a religious perspective rather than going for the throne or warrior path right away. It certainly bodes well that MC is given a great boon to help him in his "conquest". So far, the plot progression and story is just picking up and it's excellent. CD(5/5) - A biased rating to be sure due to the fact author made the MC "normal" enough for a 21st century reincarnate who got the short end of the stick, making his morals a little bit filmsy as well as the heavy plague doctor preference. Though it's heavily focused on the MC for now which is good especially as the story is just beginning. US(2/5) - Not the worst but certainly not good either. Author updates are rather slow and sporadic but at least it isn't months in between. WB(4/5) - It's based in the GoT world which has plenty of lore to work around. So far we've only seen the North but I'm assured we will be seeing plenty of world-building soon. To conclude, a decent read with plenty to like about the MC and his journey. His power gives him a heavy advantage but not insanely overpowered. Highly recommend giving it a try.
I loved the concept and I hope Author will increase rate of chapter release. ...........................................,.........,.,.........,
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the story is still doing great! also this is my second review! I want to suggest he make minor permanent changes to his body like having dense muscles and bones but make him have atheletic built, his physical capabilities should be borderline superhuman, enhance his senses by copying them from animals with said senses at high level, like Hawk-sight, Bear Sense of Smell, Spider's danger Sense, as for other changes? he could change his appearence when he needs to look like some random guy, or be specific. . . . plus all he needs is to start meeting with various lords and Maesters to make them his loyal servants, collect coins from them, plus take some of their men until he have his own loyal army of enhanced soldiers and by then he will have all of them packed with tons of battle/war experience and add it to himself too ofc, then knowlege can be giving to certain people like Katiya and ofc himself, afterward he can go to Essos to further his influence on free cities and the he can make them start massacring Dothoraki for supplies to enhance his soldiers and probably do experiments like making humanoid monsters like Minotaurs, Centaur, . . . and maybe try find Dragon Eggs and hatch them using his powers instead of the method in GoT, and then after the dragons grow he can start enhancing them like increasing the dendity and durability of their scales, increase their size until they become behemoths that will be mentionned in legends. by the end of the story I expect him to take over most of the world, or at least Westeros & Essos, make his own harem 'Wife, Mistersses, Lovers, . . .'(all he need is to plant love, devotion, and all within certain women), unify Essos and Westeros onto a single Empire(True North and Skagos should be included after massacring all cannibals from them), with a unified army of enhanced soldiers, and make enhanced servants that will be used to reconstruct cities until they became majestic, deal with all criminals or most of them, build his own capital that will be the most majestic city in the world, make maesters, researchers, alchemists; . . . cooperate to advance the sciences of their world, . . . in the end all of this are ong terme goals, which will give the story a room to become a long one, plus it does make sure you won't run out of ideas to write.