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" I DONT CARE WHAT YOU SAY OR THINK BELLA ALL I KNOW IS THAT YOU'RE SURELY GOING TO MARRY INTO THE COPELAND FAMILY !!! " my dad screamed at me
I got so pissed off that I threw my glass of whiskey at the the servants luckily for her she didn't get hit
" what the fuck is wrong with this family, just because grandpa is weak doesn't mean you can control or order me around "
first you oust I and mum out of this house because of this mother fucking piece of garbage you call a wife
and when you found out that grand pa too us in you caused such a drama leading to his heart attack and since he couldn't take care of the responsibilities at work he handed over the power of attorney to me . have spent the last five years of my life building this empire and making it what it is today, and if you think you can force me to do what you want then YOU.ARE.A.MOTHER.FUCKING.BASTARD " I said and puff out the smoke from the cigarettes I was holding on his face
" BELLA ARE YOU FORGETTING YOUR MANNERS !!! " dad's second wife Nuella screamed
"ouch my ears hurts" I held my ears pretending to be in pain
" I never forget my manners Mrs Nuella Carson , but I think some people forgot their rank and status so they decided to get involved with a married man you slut "
" BELLA !!! " dad screamed and I held my hand up to stop him from speaking
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" man my marriage has been fixed, " I said and he choked on his drink and started laughing
" you don't mean it man, the mafia king himself is about to get married and who is this damsel in distress " he raised an eyebrow
" it's Bella that crazy girl that almost killed me " this time he didn't only choke he spat out his drink
" what!! you mean that.... " he couldn't complete his statement and he only shook his head
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Hey guys this is my third book on web novel , I'll be updating it thrice a week, that is three chapters a week
thanks so much for your support hope you enjoy it ^_^
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The story idea is good with both love and gangster fml, if you can skip the writing part the whole story has a good potential, you could improve it a lot.
Nice story title. I read first chapter. This is amazing. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Nice and intriguing, but still have much room for improvement. Like the punctuations. Aside from that, this could end up as solid story. Keep on writing! the only way forward is to push through and learn!!!!
The mafia families are in a completley different world its and interesting character and I really like Bella's character, its pretty unique
I really do love the story, it somehow catches the attention of the readers, The plot alone says it all, Totally love the plot and the catchy title too😅😅
Really nice plot Author has done a great job Great story and all Looking forward for more from this author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this shameless author giving herself a 5 star review ..also I want to thank all my readers ♥️ and if you're reading this give this book a try 😊 this is my third book and am looking forward to making it the best of all my books thanks for reading once more
Quality book, it is 100% worth a read, the plot is good and who doesn't love mafia let's be real here. can't wait for more chapters, Good Luck ! x
I Love Bella she is a strong girl and doesn't let anyone tell her what to do, this story is amazing I'm glad I read it and will be reading more
Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to your story. Story wise, this has potential but a little boring and dull, so my advice would be FOCUS on the on improving your English grammar and the other technicalities involved. You do NOT need to capitalize everything, and a prologue would make it more interesting.
Wonderful take on a mafia story with arranged political marriage that ends with romance! Very good job author, do keep writing! 😍😍😍😍😍😍
Great story, I feel like the story has great promise for success. Keep it up Author. .
Hi dear, loves your book and especially the concept. The character's design and the world background are phenomenal. Love to read more from this book.. cheer up dear......
I love how the story went out in the first chapter. There is a lot of fixing of grammatical issues but it can be fixed by an outstanding author such as yourself. I enjoyed it, good work fellow novelist!
Another arrange marriage story??? Gonna read it in whole😂😂... Always a fan of arrange marriage type of story.... But although there is not many chapters uploaded so can't tell more about it now.... But gonna wait to see what will happened next.... Loved the way Bella called her grandfather GP... Its so cute..... Also well written author....
Keep up the good work , nice story Creation and development 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 Keep up 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘