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The Adventures of Roy Mustang in the Potterverse.
Self insert character.
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Yo good story so far keep it up please.🙏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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This is great. Please don’t drop it. Really well thought Harry Potter AU with great chances specially in the characters ages and an interesting mc so far. The writing is great with new and creative explanations for magic. Great story so far i hope you keep writing it.
Seems Promising but was ruined with way tooo slow update..............................................................................................................................................................................
It's just awesome after the first chapter please continue .👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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This is diffenetly one of the best Harry Potter fanfics that I ever read and trust me I read a a lot of them be it in this site or another, so keep up the good work.
besides the update time everything is good to me............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I haven't read much but I can tell it will be great! and I'm also judging from your other fanfics which were also very good. plz update regularly
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Awesome fanfic!😊 one of the greatest stories out there! keep up the great work!👍👍
I haven't even read it yet but you get 5 stars for using this obscure yet fantastic idea 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑
I love this so far. Please keep going 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍