/ Anime & Comics / Frost's Greed (Marvel)
摘要
Everyone follows Xavier, the idealist. Everyone worships Magneto, the extremist. None dare to disrespect Apocalypse, the militarist. But what about the final of the big 4.
The one who has lost their students at every turn. The one that walks down the darkest path and is unwilling to put their faith in none outside of their circle of trust. The one that cares not about how humans view mutants nor about the infighting of others. Whose only true care is for the students.
This is not a story about her but about a student of hers that believes in her ideas and teachings. Not about peaceful coexistence or mutant supremacy or survival of the fittest. To strive for a brighter tomorrow, even if they have to make it through the blackest night.
This is the story of one boy following learning how to be a mutant in a world that hates him under the teachings of the White Queen. He will go from an inexperienced kid to one of the most important mutants in the world
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I'm guaranteeing this story for a year, averaging a chapter per day (major holidays may get no chapter or more chapters.) This means that this will be my longest and most secure story, and hopefully the best, on the site.
*Warnings! Warnings! Warnings!*
- This takes place in an AU of Marvel. So while most things will remain similar to what most people are familiar with, there will be some changes (Some characters being mutants or mutates, etc)
- He will start off weak power-wise. He will become very powerful eventually but not for now. He must earn the crowd's favor.
- This will be a harem.
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I'm so confused because of how fast things are moving and how out of character Emma is acting, they are so trusting appearantly but only just met, mental month or not. I feel like I'm missing a handful of chapters that I didn't read.
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(I've only read 4 chapters so far so this might be obsolete in the future) As a member of the anti-harem sect, I hate this story on a fundamental level and that will never change, but I cannot deny that it is a good story. The MC's powers are not really that original (The whole kill to gain powers/skills/abilities is played out heavily on all fanfics) but his personality and outlook on life make his ability all the more interesting as he won't just resort to drastic measures like randomly killing a human being to gain power. (Id assume this means he won't be OP from the start and his battles will be a lot more challenging. I and others might enjoy this cuz who doesn't like an underdog) The start was fresh as he seems to be going to join the hellfire club instead of the brotherhood or Charles school which is definitely something I am looking forward to. Other than that the grammar is pretty decent and doesn't contain a lot of mistakes and even though it's an AU the characters seem to be reminiscent of their canon counterparts so it's not all that different if you're worried about like Magneto being some petty dictator or some Jesus like savior. The conversations/Dialogues so far are not bad and they don't just act like cardboard cutouts of their comic selves. My only complaint is that it's harem and I must hate this story for that, but if you like harem this might not be so bad as it doesn't seem to be a Catch e'm all type and his future girls/wives/girlfriends/lovers might have actually personalities. (Don't quote me on that) All in all this story is atrocious and I wish it never existed...but from a neutral standpoint, it seems to be headed in a good direction.
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I just think that the story was going well but the last few chapters spoiled the story which is a shame since I was enjoying the story. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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got to say that so far this story is interesting. The MC power is to take abilities of those he kills (some of them). I've got to say that this ability is one of the most OP ability that u can get as all u really need is time to grow, connection to get the rare animal/insect's etc .and last of all the Will to continue moving forward though your chosen path and not regret it. PS - will want to see how this story will turn out in the future
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it started good but later became too fast paced with practically no character development, the author just gives summary of his interaction with most characters
I hav read all the chapters till now, and I can say that this is a good story. All am waiting for is for the autor to continue the novel. Thx u Autor-sama.
a beta hero wanna-be, baby sitter, worst beta off all fanfictions maybe. Tell him to jump he asks how high..
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I dont think theres much to say. The story is just good….and because of that, other people are nitpicking and finding dumb reasons to give it 2 stars. Ignore them, and read this! 😤
This is a great fanfic, usually while reading other fics I take a break as I think I’m being overwhelmed but with this fic, I can proudly say I sat down and read all the chapters for 40 mins to an hour never getting bored as every time I read a chapter, I just could help myself from reading on even though it was getting late. Never stop doing what ur doing dude. This is a masterpiece
Writing is amazing, and the world building is close to source material, but everything about the Mc it feels like all of he’s actions are pointless. Everything he does doesn’t feel like he’s but frosts and everyone else seems as if they gaining more from frosts orders towards him, he’s just a puppet with no goal of he’s own he’s hasn’t gained his own thoughts or a belief the only time I felt as if he’s his own person was in the limbo arc away from frost influence and so in end to me he’s no a Mc but person that’s easily replaced.
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I love your book it really has come along way hope you keep it up.llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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the amount of details put into world building, character development and the evolution of the relationships of the various characters really show the passion of the author to write this story. I was personally reticent at first, because I didn't find the synopsis to be compelling, but I was hooked after the first chapter (issue haha). keep up the good work, author-san!
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If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems