/ Anime & Comics / From The Gates Of Hell (DXD)
摘要
A boy trapped in Hell will attempt to crawl his way out of Hell's gates while a certain red-haired woman sees him in her dreams.
Will he succeed in returning to his world? And how will it alter him given the suffering he endured to escape the fiery pits of Hell? Of course, the fact that a red-haired girl is fighting with her own demons doesn't help.
Some elements from DnD and other fantasy.
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So far it is ok but please atleast don't make our mc a pushover or when meeting arrogant people like Riser please make them regret or something like that
I really like the story so far. It’s unique and shows MC struggling in the beginning. Don’t worry about what anyone says; I like what you are doing to the characters, especially Rias.
the story not bad from what I read but there are inconsistencies in the story like how the description before you read the story says the mc is a boy making it sound like he is a little kid even though he is 15 years old in the story. the ideas for this story is good just need to be better executed and thought through more.
Even though it only have a few chapters, i was really hooked by it. I love the story and the character development of Mc and Rias. This is one of those ff who develop Rias and make her improve and loveable, instead of other ff who only criticize Rias for being lazy and spoiled. I love the interaction between those two too and i would like to see more. Mc's power is good too, although OP but it was delivered smoothly, it fits in the story (i just feel that him gaining those power is not forced). I watched Dxd again and is it only me who like the old animation more, rather than the new one?