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Follow Vincent Van Doren, a highly skilled assassin reborn into the magical world as a young boy. Armed with memories and expertise from his past life, Vincent navigates the challenges of Hogwarts with calculated precision, He strategically and subtly establish his dominance, all while harboring a secret mission to eliminate threats and amass power.
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this is my first fanfiction ever just warning you guys, and sorry about any spelling errors English is not my first language.
I love this fanfic, it is so different from the conventional, the author does not lengthen the story, he only writes what he considers important, the protagonist intervenes when he has to, he is intelligent, it is not dark simply for the sake of being dark, but with a clear objective. The best Harry Potter fanfic I've read in my 6 years of reading fanfics.
Too many details are missing and many more holes inside the storyline, how can professor ask about poly potion from first year, after that it was just talking fly nothing important
bro is the best character I have read so far from HP pd:keep it up pls...................................................................
ChatGPT wrote this. It feels soulless. Low effort from Author. I am highly disappointed. It’s a sad reality that ChatGPT/other AI’s are going to be more common on this app now due to laziness.
This story was amazing up to chapter 32. Reader, for your own good stop reading when you have ended chapter 32 and simply accept that this is the end of this wonderful story. ONLY read further if you like becoming frustrated and insane...
Okay, the chapters are small, ranging from about 300 to 500 words each, and the author does not seem to know most of the plot of Harry Potter. How did he get a photographic memory? We have no idea. It feels like this is an AI-generated novel. The author seems to want to rush through the entire story. He just skips so many things. In just 20 chapters, he's already in the fourth year. He skipped all character interactions, making it boring as hell to read and annoying because of the short chapters.
It can be read up to chapter 38, the rest is just written to make it longer.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
At first is quite good, it enter my top 5 for HP fanfic. However after the canon, the mc that was so powerful (magic & influence) that he has eye and ear all over the world became so weak against a weak people. If you want to read and don’t get disappointed, stop around chapter 32-33.
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Amazing simply amazing Even tho he is OP which i like he still faces some challenges and the people’s reactions to the things he do is so real. Reading this really took me in my imagination I hope the author finishes this story through. After this I cant wait to see your ideas for more stories.
This is one of the best HP fanfics I have ever read this has no unnecessary plots no unnecessary chatters it's fast paced to the point fanfic and i just love the MC he is one of the best OC i have ever seen in HP fanfics.
loving this story so much. the mc is so unapologetically ruthless, I love it.
Not for me, sorry Its more of a summary with random scenes than anything else
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honestly? best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. full disclosure, I actually hated the Harry Potter series. books or movies. but the author roped me in. I still can't stand Daphne tho
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Nice story, the pace is somewhat fast but if the focus are the later years or after Hogwarts it makes sense, the speed in wich he learns “advanced” magic is weird by this pace he will learn everything there is to learn by the second/third year wich doesn’t sound possible, but the apparent focus guns will have in this story are kind of a dealbreaker, I understand if he has to use them on the muggle world but on the magic one i just can’t stand it it shouldn’t be a hp fanfic than but something else