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Friendship with chemists is not good

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作者: Charlottess

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It is said that magic is possible without a wand. It is said that transformations can happen in ordinary life. Harry Potter had a chance to see this for himself before he came to Hogwarts, and then... Then the rest of the magical world had the same opportunity. Voldemort in awe! Avada Kedavra is obsolete! Harry Potter has other options now!







Translation from Russian. Original Russian author: Cberx222

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empire1
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I think is a good idea with a lot of potential but it needs some polishing Note to Auther: One easy thing to do is to define speech Harry said "Hello" Liz said "Morning Harry" It would make it a lot clearer when and who is speaking. Typical "is used for speech" and 'is used for thoughts'

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LLM_2
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The idea has a lot of potential, but is poorly executed. The author is hampered by poor English comprehension and grammar. I highly recommend using grammarly or even chatGPT to edit.

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