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Fragment: Bullet in the Heart

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作者: Moonamore

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“If you keep being like that, no one will love you, Kath.”

It was her past boyfriend’s words to Kathrina before he left her for good. He was cheating on her, but she got the blame for everything just because she could not give him the thing he yearned for the most. Yeah, right, sex.

Kathrina Reed had not been able to let someone touch her most private part of herself. She was terrified that someone had tried it. It brought terror into her body and forced her to freeze like a survival instinct.

With her failed past relationship, Kathrina stopped dreaming of falling in love. She was tired of getting disappointed with her partner and herself, and she was tired of visiting a psychiatrist’s office just to get better. It was better to be alone. Fewer expectations result in less hurt.

Kathrina was fine being alone for a long time until she met Arthur Ford. The man set her heart and body ablaze. Then before she knew it, she started thinking about him, longed for him, and fell too deep into him.

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Georg_Spaner

To begin with, this is really impressive for your debut work! The grammar, structure, and tension are all of a very high caliber. I typically don't read mysteries or crime novels, so I can't comment on how the plot develops. Just keep going, and you might convert me to a mystery fan ;)

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Karensia

Wow I've already loved your novel! I love this kind of romance with thriller and mystery genre, the story development is great with strong character design and world background. It starts with abduction and let's see how Kathrina deals with PTSD after the tragedy. Good job, Author!

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Powy
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The story starts dark. The tension can be felt. Well described. all kinds of emotion come up when reading, anger, fear. This is a good start for a starting writer. The story builds up slowly. not too rushed. In addition to the feeling of the ML and FL, other characters are well involved, such as the mother of the FL. I'm curious how the story will develop.

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SolaceBreeze

I really enjoyed reading this novel. The story is excellent, truly captivating with its well-structured narrative that holds my attention from start to finish. I eagerly await the next chapter's release 🫶🏻, as the plot unfolds beautifully, keeping readers captivated throughout.

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Farheen_Mallick

love the novel.its too interesting. please update soon.

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Moonamore

Hello everyone. This is my first attempt to write a book in full English, so if I made several grammatical mistakes feel free to correct me. I would be thrilled if someone would enjoy my book from the start until the end. This book is not perfect. My writing ability is lacking in many ways, but please give my book a chance 🙏 Thank you.

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Clairees

I enjoyed reading this story. The character design is pretty good. I hope you will explain more about the setting place you used in this story. While reading this book, several questions popped into my head. I can not wait to discover the truth as everything comes undone in the future.

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