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I was never born with a silver spoon! However, I have four loaded sisters who are obsessed with protecting their little brother...
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寫檢討tbh this story had potential but the author doesn't utilise it. the characters are good but again author doesn't know to utilise it. author doesn't even know what to do with this story, it's not slice of life or anything. it's just boring and the story goes NO WHERE. overall please don't pick this up thinking it is good like me, I have suffered from this story.
I started getting in to it and wanting to read more of it hopefully they write more to it. I feel it would be a shame to just drop it only after so few chapters. I have found a few that have done just a few chapters and stopped I truly hope this one won't be one of them.
From the little that has been published, It seems interesting and is a fun read. I hope the author continues it as it had potential. I won't give a high rating yet since there isn't enough chapters.
Disappointing read for this novel. It appears to be based loosely around another novel that I recall, something about 7 sisters or the like, no matter. Overall from the 15 free chapters (creators note in chapter 1 said 40 odd free) I found this dull, uninspiring and so typically cliche for this genre. Usual start is a struggling MC, down and out, needing cash fast to save ill relative, is miraculously saved by a female lead who reveals his family as their benefactor years ago. Discovers there are 3 other sisters who he now gets to live with and is to marry one by orders of their mother. From this point it is just a failing travesty. The MC is ineffective and quite righteous, but fails hard to be engaging, I could find nothing to remotely connect with to feel any particular emotion. The sisters are, fro what I have seen, rather manipulative, each not wanting to become a bride and don’t hesitate to throw other girls under the bus to gain his interest. Again, i cannot recommend this as nothing more than a sad attempt to gather readers giving nothing engaging back. Another criticism I have is the lack of reader tags to help identify various elements to enable readers to make a informed choice AND the premature chapter locks in place. Locking anything, before say 40 chapters, does not allow enough story to be assimilated and given a fair chance to decide whether it is suitable. 16 chapters is barely a footnote in a novel.