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After looking at suggestions of viewers it's acomplete rewrite better story and plot without any system.
"I find myself at a crossroads in my writing journey. The pacing in the current storyline feels rushed, leaving little room for a proper introduction of the main character. Additionally, the timeline is disarrayed, prompting me to consider scrapping the existing concept and starting afresh in the 1970s.
The new narrative would involve substantial plot development, transcending the current shitty Hollywood and the world as whole and exploring deeper themes. Making much better wish fulfillment story.
Introduction of older actresses (females) without the system in place, I envision a tale featuring fundamental superpowers like longevity and super genius.
***Synopsis...
"Have you ever wondered what a person will do when he finds himself on alternate earth?"
In a realm teetering on the edge of chaos, our protagonist is bestowed with an extraordinary opportunity. Armed with the intellect and experiences of Norman Osborn from Earth-616, they embark on an ambitious journey to build not just an empire but a utopia. As the architect of his destiny, He navigates the intricate web of power, ambition, and innovation. However, with great potential comes great responsibility, and the choices made in the pursuit of this grand vision will shape not only his destiny but the fate of the world.
Can he transcend the shadows of his past, break the shackles of ordinary existence, and truly forge a legacy that stands the test of time? Join our visionary protagonist as he navigates the challenges of building an empire and strives to create a better world against the backdrop of intrigue, ambition, and the relentless march of time people of dark kind.
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Disclaimer: Harem, Pretty Big Harem, and world-hopping with a twist, no ntr, yes stealing girls, very lustful and pretty aggressive MC. Not really his fault though. He's not dumb either.
I am doing this for fun, and it's fantasy just all books on this platform but it's going to be filled with realism.
Love all the reader's thanks for your support
And if you are very good at English I need an editor but no payment because even I don't earn A single penny from this thanks love you all
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This is a very good fanfic and I love it but the grammar in the early chapters is like someone was choking on something and couldn't see well while writing but other than that its great its a little sus how 90% of authors I see don't have English as their main language
this is the best fan fiction on the Hollywood i really like reading author writing is also very good keep updating. the character are also very good.
I just want to say I love the fanfic and I hope you more success thanks for the novel. Fyi I'm not a choosey reader who like to rumble about a fanfic they are reading and act like a boss on a free fanfic.
it's really a good story, I'm really enjoying it, don't drop this story,it would be really good if you could upload new chapters everyday 😊
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Good story. Just the right thing to read before bed. A novel for fun, no drama or other boring stuff.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
its a nice story with intresting elements but there are some problem 1. please use 'AS' sparingly 2. use either grammerly or do a proof read before uploading there are some paragraphs where i tend to loose my brain cells while figuring out what's going on. anything else about this ff is great, I can't stop reading it
Reviewing it once again and I love it beside some grammar everything is awesome 👍 definitely recommend AWESOME GREAT! 😍😍😍😍😍😍💓💓💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💕💕😘😘👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
this might not be a all rounder book like im really a superstar but it definitely something new i love it so far the ownly down side is that he does not do like everything like know technology and be a singer but everything else is great thanks
The story and character development with what can be seen is excellent, it has a great future. Besides that it has a stable rise of chapters.
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Hi Readers it's the author here keeping the streak and giving myself a 5-star review frist few chapters are in the slow peace so we warn $$$$$$$$$$$
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Story and plotline are amazing, will keep you interested for a long time. Updates are stable enough. The only downside is the Bad grammar but well the Author's mother tongue is not English so it's kinda expected. But well I have seen worse English in mtl sites and if you can read them destroying your brain cells just to satiate your Boredom then you should give this fanfic a try. I hope other's understand and don't underrate this Novel. Since Author is giving it for free and despite his bad English he is trying his level best. If too many negative comments come for Author then he might just abandon this Novel so it's better if you guys just ignore the grammar part. If anyone want's to be a translator for Author he/she can contact Author though he/she won't get paid so please keep that in my mind.