Fate: The First King

I give you 4.8 stars. the story is good. well structured and has a sense of rhythm. I liked how you portrait Artemis, although we only had one chapter of him, he gives me the Aura of a strict wise old man. the character of Icarus is not well known among the writing community, I gotta congratulate you for having the Nevers of steel to write him. looking forward to new chapters. after all this is - 👇

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Writing quality is quite good. Author updates quite frequenlty to the point he does it every 1-3 days. Story development is quite good but needs improvement. Character design is also really good. World background is good aswell but needs improvement. 5/5 rare gem fanfic and quite sad not many people know this fanfic but I hope more come to enjoy it this is for chaps 1-26 review

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I ain't gonna explain myself, I gives myself 5 stars course it's my work. I spend nights without sleeping 😴 , this is my reward. Anyway I suggest you guys to read this I promise you it's gonna be good — well depending on your scale of good that is— This is Author, signing off for now ✍️📸📖

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This novel is very good but it's a shame it had to be left by the author.jwjajanansmqhsjaanbsnssnsbsnwjwwjjsjssjjsjwwnjeejejejejejajjejejejejejejejejejejejejejrjrjjrkejejejejjej

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