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"Ah... Finally done,"
Renji leaned back in his chair as the game he had been playing for many years reached 100% cleranse, with all achievement and none of his waifus or people dying.
"Hm... there is still one final scene left. Is it my victory ccg or smt like that!?"
"I'll check that later,"
He stretched, feeling his stiff muscles craking. and shut down his computer.
"Guess I should go get some snaks ... Or at least a drink."
Without changing out of his t-shirt and sweatpants, Renji headed out. He slipped on his sneakers and stepped into the evening air.
The setting sun caught him by surprise.
"... Wait... how long did i play this time!? Sigh... i need to stop playing that hard or my death will be on that chair."
Renji walked towards the convenience store while his mind was still half in the game world. Halfway there, he noticed a woman standing on the sidewalk. Something about her made him stop and stare for a long time. Her golden hair seemed to shimmer in the fading light, and her eyes... there was something familiar about them... 'Heh!? is that elves ears!?'
The Woman came closer to him and before passing him, she said in a sweet voice, *Good luck Ash...*
Renji: "?_?"
Before Renji could process what was happening, she was gone. He blinked and rubbed his eyes
"Am I seeing things?" he mumbled to himself. "Ah... they say gaming for too long drives you crazy... i need to lessen them..."
After sighing helplessly, he continued to the store. In the brightly lit store, Renji grabbed an energy drink and paid without a word.
As he walked back to his apartment, he couldn't shake the strange encounter from his mind.
Back in his room, Renji paused. His computer screen was still on, and the game was still running.
"That's weird," he said. "I thought I closed it."
*Thanks for Playing!*
As Renji looked at the screen showing a "congrats" message with fireworks, and a side note near the inbox, icon,
"Hmm!? a gift for finishing the game!?"
[Congratulations, You have fulfilled the requirements to unlock ******* Would you like to proceed?]
Renji: "?_?"
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Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. Thanks
When I see no 2-3 star review on a novel it almost always turns out to be burst (since author mostly deletes those reviews to maintain their ranking). Hope I am not tasting the poison xd
Perusing through the comments, I've uncovered a shocking revelation: the author seems to have a peculiar penchant for dropping novels like it's a hot potato. Smooth reading? Nah, more like cliffhanger acrobatics! I was all hyped up after glimpsing the synopsis, but now I'm second-guessing my life choices. Come on, author, throw me a literary lifebuoy here!
Loved it from the first chapter. Devoured all the chapters in one go. Do yourself a favor and give this book a try its a Pure gem.
Local reader since around the beginning here, making this review with this having ended... around a month after it did. I was waiting for information on potential side stories, but for now I'll leave this here; if there's side stories I'll come back to this. Anyways, pretty neat story and stuff. Not much of a comment, but it's not like I binged this in one go, so I can only remember so much, nor do I got anything to point out that's spectacular. I would've liked to see more of the side characters, though. As for the ending, no specifics of course, but I didn't dislike it, and for me, an 'I'll take it' ending is nice enough. Hopefully side stories come to add on more. And then there's me and my hundreds of typo corrections in this story. It's not like I corrected everything (I'm not paid), but hopefully you (readers) can find/have found the corrections helpful.
Very impressed so far. Plot thread details get a bit complicated, but the characteristizations and the relationships get handled quite well. Plot is also starting to shift to a bigger stage at this point and this is where a lot of novels fall apart. Power creep, new female love interests, or just a major tonal shift in an effort to keep the readers engaged usually weighs the story down. Here, the author is choosing to scope up in a way that feels pretty fresh and intentional, and while we get more characters, the core female leads are still getting attention. Best of all, the MC is getting development as well. Personally, the indulgent scenes that deepen character bonds and focus on slice of life are most rewarding. I’m a big fan of how often MC gets to reflect on his past through the POV of his wives and then gets an opportunity to do better, while still being aware that he was never criticized for his behavior. They are yandere but nothing about their feelings isn’t well justified at some point (last wife hasn’t had her back story fully explored yet). If anything, I think it’d be good for the MC to get a little more possessive and yandere after he gets closer to them. It’s more rewarding to deepen his current harem than expand the members endlessly. Overall I’d tell readers to definitely give it a try, and I’d encourage the author to keep going, as he’s got something special here. Keep up the good work!
(excuse me in advance for potential mistakes as English is not my 1st langage) At chapter 376, the last chapter out at this moment. Amazing stuff really well writed, I only have one worry, it seems that the story is coming to an end soon and the sin city arc was very rushed when compared to the previous arc, the dream city arc which must be the longest arc and which took the luxury of showing us the backstory of Thia and Nova. Sin city moved very quickly and I won't talk about the current arc since it's not finished but I'm kinda sad, especially since this arc really hypes me up seeing how it is teased throughout the whole story. Apart from that, the story is incredible I loved reading it well done author
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Just found this book today on daily recommendation and now I really recommend this for everyone else to read 🤩📖🍻
Its good..5/5 for me, Slow phased are good without much Flaws, But until 85+ chapters.. I just realize, or its just me, but the quality seems to be, i don't know, Not good?.. I just realize, the writing seems to be different compared to 1-80 chapters, like this for example (Renji: "Hogarth, your name doesn't sound local!"). There's definitely wrong with this(or its just me ).. Even though its not of a big deal, The writing quality seems to be falling. The character interactions seems to be weird, like there's still lacking in some point. ...Eileen character changed(or not) when they arrived at the dragon nation. Its like I'm reading the original story but unfamiliar at the same time... It's just me or not realized that?.. hmmm but still good... I'll be back after reading 125 chaps...
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Honestly I am gonna stop at chapter 28 I got bored of it and it’s little to slow pace for me
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Good. It looks very interesting and I'm going to give it a chance, but there's one thing that puts me off. This cheating tag... What exactly does it refer to? In a Harem novel this tag is often very dangerous. Will women betray the MC? Or is it something else?
read it after completion, but the world building is excellent, the characters are unique and easily remembered, and the story is good enough that I personally read the entire book straight through.
T‘was good! All in all I thought it had a great plot and the twists were good. The background and storyline was described very well without real gaps I could point out. For me personally, I wasn’t the greatest fan of the ending, but I also can‘t say it was bad, just a bit unexpected and rushed. During the rest of the novel I felt the following story was foreshadowed better in comparison to the end because some important concepts were introduced very late snd can seem like kind of an asspull. But in the end it was still an enjoyable read. [img=recommend]
Because of the author the book became a boring waste of time. First 40 to 50 chapter the story was excellent later it became a complete waste as there is zero progress in story lot side characters are introduced and side characters play more imortant role in most of chapters than main characters. Author no one cares about side characters or their plots who will take a back stage once the story arc is finished. So stope wasting readers time. If you want to write a 5000 chapter novel it is OK but there should be a proper story to write.
Honest review after my free day of reading this novel. I don’t like the MC nor do I hate him. He exploits woman around him while feeling good reaching his goals like that. He is like a Mordern woman & not a simp. I had good laughs but I can’t handle the guys around him, it’s like he is the only real male on that plane while others just do as he says without knowing who or how strong he is…. You can’t deny that he would be a cuckhold or dead if out Author wasn’t this delusional like woman these days I hope you write a new one and improve in that part !