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摘要
Evan crossed over, but he wasn't worried at all... because he had the character template from the mobile game and five devil fruits obtained from a lottery draw with him.
Evan believed that he could rely on the special physique obtained from his first recharge, as well as the devil fruits in his backpack, to become a powerful figure in the world of One Piece.
But it wasn't until Evan opened his eyes and saw a crimson dragon that he realized this wasn't One Piece at all, it was Fairy Tail!
Starting by capturing Erza? Nope, starting by being captured by Irene!
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The writing quality is bad but not unreadable 2/5, the updating stability is average 3/5, story development is average 3/5, character design is average, world background is average 3/5. this is a average read if the grammar was fixed I would read it
As one of the first reviews and only having 7 caps, I say it's worth a look. I liked this beginning. But it still has a lot to develop... It had a different beginning, showing us dear Belserion. I wonder if he learns dragon slayer magic and just becomes a dragon, will he be able to mix with his dragon Zoan?
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Honestly I like it, it has quite a few errors, but I like the system, how he gets stronger and all. What I dont'tlike is this random arc of collecting characters. I know it's necessary but we really don't see much of MC's thought process and I think the official author is trying(forcing) us with a comedy gag of fairy tail destruction. like we get it, write something unique. so yeah I like the background I suppose but I don't like the direction story is going towards. p.s. be ready for a lot cringe words (all the talk between characters makes no sense)
This is such a good story but I know its mtl and its rare to find a mtl story that's not harem so can someone please tell me whether this is a single love interest or harem?
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i give 5 star cause good story bit minot wrong sentence like gender of the mc and others and sometimes name but overall it's good
The writing quality is bad but not unreadable 2/5, the updating stability is average 3/5, story development is average 3/5, character design is Bad 1/5, world background is average 3/5.
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If the translation is even a little better... I would have given it 5 stars... but there are many mistakes. At least get the names ✅️ right.
was very good until chapter 25 the editing went down hill really fast after that. Then it became 30% more chinese syntax mistakes.
BAD Translate, there was an error in the character name, but until now it has never been fixed
i dont have any major issues exept that they keep mixing up ur and uleir and there posiions the nmaes are wrong and all that to i would love if that got fixed
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