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摘要
She has an iron heart in a velvet body.
He's like a black hole inside the sun.
She's strong with fragile pieces.
He's fierce above his afraid self.
She was the light in his gloomy world.
He was the darkness that took her last shine.
She became the aspire of his life.
He made her life aimless.
She wants to revenge him.
He wants to acquire her.
She searches for freedom from him.
He captures her in a golden cage.
She fell for a person she hates the most.
He loves a person who he can't love.
He was her enemy with a tag of a husband.
She was his fear with a title of a wife.
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For starter the FL is strong and ML has other purposes than chasing a skirt. The background is really interesting. The major problem I faced is the editing. It is a complex story which has many branches, it is difficult to add them up at the beginning and then the grammar is challege on top of that. This seriously needs editing otherwise I feel this one is going to turn into a story with great potential.
Too many perspectives/characters which aren't introduced properly,confusing.Well at least ML has good backstory and isn't your typical joe who thinks with his dick...
It's good novel. Understandable for MC not showing his potential yet, since its only have less than 8 chapter. And you need update daily to, so other have the interest for collect the novel.
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