/ Sci-fi / Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS)
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Year 2050, after a couple of astrological phenomena that just by coincidence happened at the same time, the world changed completely.
The phenomena generated a very special electromagnetic wave,
This changed everything, all the technology became useless, and it also changed the brain cells interactions of part of the population.
Some of them died, some just resisted them and continued their lives, but some of them got special powers...
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This is a very good story, extremely different from most of the clichés on this site. Honestly I do not understand why she is in such a low position. It does have a system, but it is not overpowering senseless. It has a very good launch rate, stability and excellent writing quality. Errors of writing happen a lot in the first few chapters, but then they go down until they become imperceptible. It may be that you consider some things at the beginning of the story to be meaningless, but everything has a later explanation, even things that you thought were the author's inability. The interactions and development between the characters is incredible and I feel being watching a conversation between real people, the decisions they make try to be rational but you can feel the thrill that drove them to it. The emergence of superpowers does not seem forced. The world fund seems a bit confusing in the first few chapters, but it's because the characters themselves do not know what's going on, why would we know? And in some chapters we have a much clearer picture! If it were to become premium I would continue reading without any problem. I'm pretty realistic in my reviews, this story for myself that is not a 5 is at least a 4.7, and I totally recommend taking a chance and reading. Earlier negative reviews basically read little and judged before the author began to explain things.
Seems like an interesting story however the grammar is pretty much crap. It's better than most but still not within an acceptable level for a writer, so the story needs some major editing. There is a lot of unnecessary information without some of the necessary world building.
Couldn't go past 3 chapters. If later this story becomes good, I would not know. But so far... Too many characters, all of them feel the same, except for cat. Bad writing skill, it reads like a child is playing with dolls and keeps narrating which doll does what. The characters don't interact like real people would, author completely fails to depict any emotional reaction vividly, with gripping *******. For example, the group encounters bizarre, science-defying phenomenon - a telepathic talking cat - and what they discuss a literal minute later? Sleeping arrangements, who is going to sleep in which bed. Wow, such realistic reactions.
The story is above average and is fairly interesting, but the grammar in some situations is god awful. Its like the author never bothers to proof read. Get an editor to fix all the typos and grammar, and this review will rise to 4 stars at the least
Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................... But Can Speed Up The Development A Litte Faster....... .............................................. .............................. ................... ............... .....
This story has great potential so far has great story. At this point I am not able to fully judge because of lack of chapters. But its quality is better than most of the originals I have seen
I love this novel !!! The only bad thing is that the entire novel isn't in Dante's POV
This is a great gamer style story. I like how Spencer isn't completely relying on his system like most of the other gamer characters. He also values his companions instead of seeing they as tools and resources. I will continue to read this novel until it finishes.
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The story needs a harem tag. It starts out very good, but the non-sexual harem elements begin showing up pretty quickly. A large number of female characters gather around the MC. The only male secondary character begins showing more weaknesses, character flaws, reduced appearances, etc than the female ones. Then it just stops the pretenses at being a monogamous story.
Basically it is an apocalyptic setting novel with MC who gets an A.I. System. I did not come across something like it before, but I really do like this novel. The novel follows a somewhat slow but logical rhythm in events. The events and scenes are not pumped up with over the board action. But still they are enough to keep the reader wanting more. I'm still in chapter 36 but I believe there will be some romance and maybe a love ******** since the sparks are there between the MC and his ex-girlfriend and his next door girl whom he knew since childhood who had a crush on him.
This is one of the best I've seen so far . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . ... Only reason I wrote this review is because the book was that good!!!!!
This story has a lot of potential to be unique and is a great read from the original section. It is one of my favourite stories to come out of the original novel section and I hope the author continues the story because as long as they do I will vote with my power stones.
I like the story, but the pace is a bit to low ............................................ ......................................... ................
Seems good.. But too bad, its use first point of view.. I dont like it or just cant enjoy it to be honest.. So skip then.. Good luck.. ........ . ... ... ........
More chapters please............................................ More chapters please............................................ More chapters please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Each chapter keeps getting better and better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to the next updatevd chapter...............................................
I love the story, i like this book. Yeah. So.. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
Hi, author here. The story follows a group of 5 survivors(+cat) of an apocalypse event. This event changed the world, technology got lost and some people and animals got powers. The MC obtained System based power. The story starts with this event and then shows how the world and the survivors change when they got powers and had to fight to survive. The MC doesn't become almighty right away and the story focuses more on their survival and interactions and stories between his group. About me. This is my first novel, and since i'm not an English native speaker the writing quality may not be the best, but I believe that with experience each chapter will be a little better than the ones before. Thanks for reading and for those that haven't read the novel yet, I hope you enjoy it.