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Dustin needed to evolve to survive on this hostile alien planet. If he can survive a year, he'll be released, free and clear. Unfortunately, no one's ever done that before.
And it's not looking like he will either...
Check out the sequel:
Evolutionary Convict
It follows Dustin as he tries to find a home with Olivia, but everything still seems to be out to kill him...
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Spoiler, maybe? Whatever. I really enjoy this book and even though I found it a bit late this is an awesome survival novel and I find it fascinating that you managed to add another level of inception to the story to give it more plausible content paths and you added it so seamlessly by so obviously that you can tell that another step has been taken, you just don't know how. I also really enjoy how you employed minor amounts of advanced psychology in a double entendre kind of way even if you didn't notice it. Side not for all of this I'm thankful you didn't go to in-depth into the nsfw side of this novel. That fact lets me enjoy the novel much more and you have my gratitude
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Youngen This first book is not Finished. Many loose ends still. It needs atleast 1 more book to tie up the loose ends smiling. 👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☕
Very Interesting plot and world. The character developement could ve been a bit better imo and the ending leaves quite a bit to be desired. Hoping for a sequal
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This has been an absolutely great novel, one if the best I've ever read. It's too bad it's so short, and thankfully there will be a sequel eventually or my body would be a bunch of meat paste under the cliff the epilogue dropped me off. Of course I'd have brought the Author down with me, since it would've been his fault. If you're reading this review, but you haven't read the novel, STOP WASTING YOUR TIME READING A MEANINGLESS REVIEW AND BE ON THE EDGE OF THE CLIFF WITH EVERYONE ELSE! Ah, now that that's over, just read the damn book. You'll thank me later. ;) Oh yeah, author that I keep forgetting the name of because of your name's eccentricity, thanks for making this, and I will honestly kill you if there is no sequel. Oh, and have a nice day!
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One hell of a Novel. Love the Plot. Hope that there will be Lots of chapters in the future. Its the perfect evolve System scifi novel! Dont know a better one thanks tis one XD
This is a pretty cool take on the whole evolution thing, cool creatures, nice twists, so if you have time give it a quick read you won't regret it. **. Plz don't ever drop this
It was a breath of fresh air that had me engaged from the start to end. The characters' background was build up so well that it didn't show deliberation and synced in well with the story and that was my favorite part of this novel. And I wish the author good luck to keep making quality works in her future works as well. Thank you.
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Writing Quality: I thought it was fairly all right. Some of the descriptions I thought it could have been better. 4/5 Stability of Updates: The author pays a lot of attention to all comments and will reply at times. 5/5 Story Development: The story starts off interesting. Could have more descriptions. There are appox. 5 filler chapters about ch. 45 that didn’t add much value to the story line. The story does end strongly though. 4/5 Character Design: The two main characters are intriguing, I would have personly liked to see some more Shonen expressions; for instance, the character unleashes its rage or all of its power. More character interactions would have been good, other than the two main characters. 4/5 World background: I thought everything was explained adequately. There was a mention of a bike in the story. I mistaken it for the classical ET bicycle, but it turned out to be a Starwars Speedster. 5/5 Overall, I enjoyed reading this, and definitely will be reading the sequel. The fundamental imagination I consider to be excellent.
The wonderful thing of this story is the way it draws you in. The character development is awesome. By the way it is written you feel like you are part of the story yourself. I would recommend it to everyone interested in the genra.
I consider this a good piece of writing. While it’s not my usual genre. I still consider it worth five stars. I hope this author goes on to write mini stories.
I thank the author for good read he has provided. I read all the 67 chapters here in one go. I was indeed engrossed with the character Dustin as story progressed at a very thrilling and captivating development. His journey or survival to find his identity and escape to earth has been a superb entertainment. The good part of the story was that it was moderately gore in some parts compared to novels which depict too intense of a gore and tragedy which off course leads to turnoff. I would wish to continue further reading, yet would hopefully wait for an entire story part to complete to enjoy the work.
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Way way way better than expected! I would recommend this book to any one reading this review! can’t wait to read the second one!!! The premise is awesome! The main character is awesome! can’t wait to see what happens next!
Wow! Just WOW!! I rarely give 5 star reviews but this story really deserves it!! Good writing quality and good story development.. Really author you deserved this 5 star review!
Fast paced yet intricate. It's well thought out, and the character development is one of, if not the best I've seen in a very long time. From the moment I started reading this, I've been invested in the characters and their experiences. I read the all the chapters in one sitting, and honestly I wish there was more. The author is amazing and beyond talented. Saying Good job is an understatement. Keep it up