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WPC #188: Bronze Winner
["So miss System, how can I become awesome"
"Host you cannot become awesome"]
Success was surrounding me all the time, I was Rich, Handsome, and a Playboy. And you know what, I was always surrounded by beauties.
Then one day, my life took a nightmarish turn.
"What the fuck"
I was in a body of a monkey. Bloody GOD had me incarnated in a body of Monkey!!! Where is my Handsomeness and...
At least he should have me incarnated in a body of Fox or a Peacock. I should have shown my awesomeness, a cute Panda is also fine.
Follow the journey of a self-centered narcissist man, who wanted to become awesome but became a GOD.
P.S: Image used from this source
https://www.deviantart.com/vesner/art/Monkey-Death-Ray-297852108
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The thought of him being a Playboy then made him reincarnate as a monkey was hilarious.haha 😂. You do know how to be a comedian with this one. I can see this is a half finished novel as I can still see that it still needs editing. Still, it didn't bothered me to read the story. I hope you release more in the future. 👍
the concept is very good but the mc is like sanji but very stupid, the mc literally just thinks about "beauties" and it got old after 4 chapters. other than that the chapter length is short which isn't bad.
This is a mess . A BEAUTIFUL mess ! i have a lot of Fun reading this as the writer make things very interesting. This is a fun twist on the genre and is very entertaining.
Chapters are VEry short. messy plots and issues. Also i just gotta point out, super rich guy who is bedding several hot ladies still not happy with his life and wants more woman so he can be more awesome??? Like WTH??
author, your story is very addictive!! I'm sorry I read it so fast...keep up your great work! The story gets a lot better after the first evolution of the mc, and man, I can't wait to see the harem progress. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) I apologize if I wrote something wrong, I use google translate 🇧🇷
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so far have only read the discription but I can feel this is gonna be good since from what I can tell there's gonna be a lot of "reject humanity return to monke" memes And this books gonna be a giant bucket of laughs (will update review when I read the book right now I'm reading some other books so this is going in my "read later" folder)
Dropped chapter 2 First chapter give impression mc is intelligent due to being a consultant and multimillionaire that quickly changes into him being given millions due to death of parents And dialogue is terrible
English is probably not the authors native language, and I understand that. Some grammar and stuff have to be changed, but it is fine. The character design is hilarious, him being rich and a narcissist but reincarnating as a monkey.
Review: Very interesting story, chalked full of excitement. I love the characters and development of the story. From beginning to end the story is truly unique. It grows on you as you scroll each chapter, the mc has a very dynamic set of skills and he utilized them to his full potential. The hesitation in the beginning by the mc is expected of anyone going through such a change of station. The leveling system worked well with the mc’s development and was simple enough to understand. A good story through and through… 🦍👌🏿🤘🏿🤙🏿👍🏿👍🏿
so far it's very good and i'm involved in the story if you disregard the english errors it's ok but the bad thing is the delay to release new chapters
Everyone this book clearly teaches us why we don't click on weird link. It's a great story, author really described the guy right. But it's kind of funny. Loved to more of the monkey adventures
I stoped at ch.9, I just couldn’t stand the banter between the system and him and the way the character keeps repeating how awesome he is. Good luck on the book Arthur, just not my cup of tea.
i like the story, its pace is nice, character feels a bit iffy sometimes but its a very good read. The background plot progression always leaves room for a bit more mystrey and its quite funny and fun to read too
i like the story a lot at the beginning but started to hate the mc,even though this story has great potential and i actually like the story,i am dropping this because of mc,i hope the best for the author and i relly think this is a great story but i didn't like it,but i recommed others to read it
a Playboy returns to monkey after death and strives to be awesome but turns into God, in other words return to monkey to become God. sounds good to me man
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
A fun-filled novel. The MC's interaction with the system really amused me. Ant killing part, the gorilla chasing part, and all of those comedic parts are awesome. Keep up with your good work, author.
I have read few chapters so far, and it has been a fun ride. The constant confrontation between the Host and its system is fun to watch. The idea itself is pretty interesting. It is a great story, and I will continue to read it.
Comedy/power fantasy that feels like a parody with abridged series vibes. Most of the pros are dialogue which leads to a quick read with few descriptions. A few times, the lack of dialogue tags + a character speaking twice in a row made me lose track of who was talking. But the characters have unique voices, so it never takes long to get back on track. The story is a standard video game-inspired power-based world. In parallel, the world background and enemy design follow this theme. Fun comedy power fantasy that can give you a laugh if that's your thing. :)
Hey, Reaper here, its one of my starting novel, so there may be some mistakes here and there, pls comment for it, and enjoy the book. Your reviews are most welcome