摘要
One day, a knight once dreamed of a day when the sun turned black and when the swarm of what they had called demons ravaged their lands. He had seen what happened, he had seen the mightiest heroes fall and so, he did his best to alert everyone and to share his word. He wanted to protect them but in the end, at his dying breath, no one believed him but his wife and son.
This is the story of mankind’s struggle before everything turned bright, but, before that happens, let's show you their dialogue while they're peeling their potatoes, shall we?
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5評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
LOL just doing this thing because of EXP but also because I want to say a thing or two about what is happening so far in volume 1. The most we know so far is that there's monsters, the gang split up, and there's some kind of big thing that will happen in the future. Hmmm... So far, that's not quite a lot, so I'm hoping that the next few chapters will reflect on this better by showimg us more plot-relevant moments and plot-driven fights. Still a solid piece, nonetheless. Looking forward for the next chaps!
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i love it! more author! ^_^ i love it! more author! ^_^ i love it! more author! ^_^ i love it! more author! ^_^ i love it! more author! ^_^ i love it! more author! ^_^ i love it! more author! ^_^ i love it! more author! ^_^ i love it! more author! ^_^
揭示劇透 Really promising novel of course! Seeing this bloom from the very beginning to what it is right now is pretty great. As a reader, I can't wait to see what will happen next! Good job.
The story seems promising. Like it's pulling me towards their world and watch how events would lead to some possibilities. I'll stay tuned for more updates and see how this story will develop. ^_^
揭示劇透
Nothing but good things so far! Its a fun and wholesome ride filled with the usual fantasy quirks. Its great if you want a chill version of LOTR, but you also kinda wanna ruin all of it and have them all fight each other already hahahaha!