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Madara Uchiha was given another chance.
A chance to live again, but this time in a different world, will madara be able to live her life normally? or once again he will try to bring eternal peace to this new world.
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If the character was Hashirama instead, it wouldn't be so shocking. This madara is broken. Thank you for writing a novel for me to read. Good luck.
Please post an update to fan fiction so that people will not be confused and think this is copied from that place. Please do not delete this review too. Thank you very much hope you have a good day.
Very good. Блин мне лень писать на английском. В общем автор ты молодец я люблю твою маму за то что она родила тебя.
I knew that this story reminded me of another one? Are you Liquid's Wraith the author of Uchiha Revenge? because it’s same story from fanfiction.net.
Madara indeed. But, it's a retarded one! What do you expect? I honestly read only up to Chapter 3 because I didn't get hooked up even up to that point. It'd be useless for me to force myself read something that I didn't like. So this is what I think for what I've read: 1. The 'Madara' here is supposed to be the Madara from the battle of Shūmatsu no Tani, which means he comes from the time before he becomes the so-called Uchiha no Bōrei. The past conversation he had with Hashirama hinted that he has a change of heart. But, a person's personality can't change in an instant. Things quickly escalated, and I couldn't feel any semblance of Madara anymore. I don't know whether the author doesn't have deep understanding of Madara's character or he purposefully did that for 'originality' purpose, but for it was somehow painful. 2. Writing skill is somewhat average, but the author is definitely better than the worse ones I have seen. Unfortunately, the way he advanced the story seemed all over the place. It's quite understandable, since we're not talking about a professional author here, but I personally would avoid it. 3. The story would be likeable to some, and irritating for some — such as me. But, people have preferences, right? Rather than taking someone's opinion wholly and later mocked them for it, you should have taste for yourself first. Keep scribbling and improving, Author!
The character development is great, though I still feel like something's missing. Like, Issei, lacking a strong drive to be like Obito but in the world of DxD. just seeing Asia being kidnapped right in front of her eyes is still not enough for me. If the author wants to make Issei like Obito it needs a stronger push dorongan
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There is serious character flaws in story as they feel just like a shell with no substance, its like the character has no ideas, their will , etc
Por ahora, ta chido, me gusta :3 Siga con el buen trabajo muchacho, y se cuida , saludos
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personally I like the story it and it's a good fanfiction specially if it's madara one of the best character in Naruto Shippuden(series) even though there are plot holes, there is no such thing with no plot holes. hmm who will be the first and main harem member?
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Madara? Sure, the body’s there. The character isn’t. Why do people create stories of people like Madara, Gilgamesh, Escanor, and other people with gigantic egos if they can’t even even portray them for even half of who they are?