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A young man woke up in another world with a reward system.
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The story has a very good grammar and I am really fond of the author's approach to the magic aspect of their universe. Additionally, the addition of the planting/beast growing aspect is a very big plus for me. Lastly, although the story is tagged to include game elements, the way that the author incorporates the system is the way I like it as - not too overpowering nor does it saturate the story with endless "blue screens". Overall, from the quality that I have read so far, I would definitely recommend this as it is a very interesting read.
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I like the story but i have some suggestions like make a table like status and missions and fo the mc to be more adventurous and also to widen and make the chap.s longer if it can be thats all but ireally love youre story
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It started generic and went downhill from there. Why Asian novels lack any character development? Why add characters that are not important? And never used? Interesting slow idea that didn't turn out to be any good.
Low review cause crummy dude reviewing every other day 5 stars, not what its for -------------------------------'----- supercalifragilisticexpaladocius
Good Story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Good story ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Manaroot,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.....................................................................
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Till now it is an well written novel. Highlights of this novel are system, premise of story and pace of the story. Mc is above average character (nothing too special but not irritating or naive). Hope author completes this novel.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Celery! The first chapter is really well written. The description of everything is point and it got engaging the moment you wrote "the stick he proudly called a fishing rod." 😂
good going..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.........................................................................
This is a really high quality story thats well built and has alot of worldbuilding no easily discernible grammar/spelling mistakes. Interesting plot and a steady progression of the protagonist. If you like a protagonist who isnt overpowered from the start but gets stronger as the story progresses then you should read this book