/ Anime & Comics / Essence of Unwanted Adventure: A Multiverse Story
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I've always sought to be better, to be more, that is the purpose of this adventure the ROB told me. That is what I thought even before being dimensionally displaced. But now I want to do what I have always sought to do live and thrive.
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Everything is great, i just believe you should just research more about the important events to the respective universes.
this is extreme wish fulfillment with the mc instantly having access to literally anything with no consequences. hence there is no plot just the mc jumping around grabbing things from random other alternate universe to suit his needs fandoms and generally acting rather immature. grammar was ok but sentences like all things need to end eventually, in this case far sooner. could've been much better but mc is unrestricted and therefore cannot be forced into acting within the realms of a plotline. Not brainrot though at least. I would also suggest stop mentioning other things from different IP's or other universes because everytime i need to leave and google something i might not come back. terrible for user retention. should be 2 stars but at least you didn't give MC one piece haki lol.
This is my first work that I am posting and hoping that people enjoy. Feel free to review and comment as any help is appreciated.
It is great but it is too edgy for my taste👍👍 and why dont you proceed your story in anime stories since hes already too powerful consider it like their vacation
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I love everything about this FF, it could use a bit better grammar but it's overall great, the author listens to advice and even some of the wants and ideas of commentators so that makes it even better
Te doy 5 estrella bro has captado toda mi atención, en mi humilde opinión es diferente a los demás que he visto y me engancho ,no puedo esperar por las actualizaciones
meh. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .