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Transmigrated in erotic game and having a lot of fun. A lot of R-18 chapter.
I have come to know that the grammar and paragraphs sentencing of my novel were not good. So, I have made some updated To chapters.
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The Arthur gets the genders mixed up sometimes and the Mc abilities are a little complicated bug other than that everything is great Please try
do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......
Are you interested MCs who don't want power but they get power? are you interested in MC that keep complaining about anything and everything ? Do you think keep complaining look cool? then try this novel.. this is really not my type.. undeserved power..annoying mc..forced plot..no character development ..
please try to fix the translation It's giving me a headache just trying to understand
The novel is horrendous atrocious it is not even close to being able to comprehend it is extremely unintelligible with 99% of the written content this author is atrocious as a writer and doesn’t need to continue writing unless they fluently learn how to speak and write english.
It's worse than MTL quality past 200+ chapters. Even a single sentence is a struggle to comprehend. I really tried but it's just impossible for any sane person to make heads or tails off it. Too bad, I was starting to enjoy the novel. Maybe I'll give it a try again if the Author does something about the 300+ incomprehensible chapters.
Очень плохой текст, как по качеству так и по наполнению.....................................................................................
The MC's attitude is kind of annoying, or I know in chapters after chapter 7, but I get tired of everything he says, maybe things will change later, but I'll leave it for a while and if I have nothing I'll keep reading it later.
Nice work, some grammar and structure error but ok,......hmmm[img=Why] feels like i have read it on other work like a manhwa,manga .... can't seem to remember it, fellow's help on this??
writing quality is bad but I have read worse than this. anyway not a bad webnovel to read if you want to pass time. anyway it is free..
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
this is good for casual reading, its just a bit bad on language part, make me confused sometimes
Author you speak like....this which is... very annoying to even... read... ..Don't get me.. started on the other parts... Example.. can't understand.. what anyone.. is saying or person.. speaking..
If you don't like a simp MC who is extremely prone to be Cucked don't read it. Just imagine denying to have seggs in an eroge becoz you are searching for true love. It is annoying.