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I made a mistake and now I created another story, and the same thing, and just change the cover, support me there, like and add the library
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the idea is good but there are only two chapters so i can't talk to sera in the future, updates are good for now, i like the idea i pray you get it right
its shameless author here, unabashedly rated five stars on his own novel, knowing you're watching. I have no regrets hahahahahahahahahhaha a hail to the Brazilian people and especially from Rio de Janeiro h🤡👋
I liked it a lot, the author seems to be evolving a lot from the first chapter until now. I hope that in the future it will continue to improve, and enter the top 5 of the Ranking 🥰😍🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌
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Please keep up the marvelous work and its the most amazing work recently that i have been reading. I just hope the author always keep advance planning for chapter that way there wont be need for dropping and we will be able to enjoy it.
Looks very hopeful so far I’m on chapter 18 and I like the story so far but my only complaint so far is that the intro feels long winded, I would prefer time skip to adulthood.
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I wont say much about story because it will ruin the surprise but its Amazing concept and i hope to see it soar in the ranking and read daily chapters of it. Apart from that many stories like this has one problem the writer is not planning ahead for the story development or lose motivation in both cases we get the droped story SO I HOPE THAT THIS DOESN'T HAPPEN.