/ Anime & Comics / Endless New Dawns
摘要
'This is the end', were the thoughts of Chara. The thoughts that ran through her, as she saw that Universe was suddenly erased from existence.
And as expected it really was the end of her, for real this time.
But who could have expected that only the remnant of her HATE could be strong enough to sustain herself in absolute nothingness...
(Welcome to my second novel you mongrels, this time legit. But don't expect ANY releases anytime soon, after all I still work on my other one.
I don't know where the pic from my cover is from, I tried searching for the source artist, but that particular pic already went through to much for me to find...
...anyways it ain't mine.)
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How are you doing ? I just wanted to leave my honest review of this fanfiction. I'v been waiting for a 5th chapter for a month now and I tought "why not offer a review?" So here it is: The pace of the narration is slow enough that the fanfiction doesn't feel rushed but quick paced enough to keep the reader entertained. I like the character development (for all of the 4 chapters out) and I'm looking forward to more of it in the future. I'm a little lost at which world she is in right now so I won't comment on that. As for the update frequency, I feel that it could use a little more work or longer chapters if there is only one a month. I hope the next chapter comes out soon so I can finally know in which world she is in. Keep up the good work!
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