/ Anime & Comics / Elvis in DC
摘要
A Elvis and DC fan dies and gets reborn in DC with very interesting powers.
No One 17 and Under Admitted
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- 寫作品質
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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
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okay like I said this is a great story I love the concept of an elves magical person but cone on man the writing quality is trash the sentences are all together no spacing too tell who is talking plus the short chapters bro I've seen this if you don't change your style up and fix this you will eventually rewrite this story because it's all over the place
5 stars just for the idea.... it does however bring to question how you came to think of such and idea. is it meth.........its meth isnt it. jokes aside looking forward to where this goes with great interest.