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EE22332

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作者: TempoLane

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Dunge
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A story about how the Elven kin being that self conscious race who knew that they can mess up mother nature and make the concept of bureaucracy worser with faster and better efficiency than humankind if they went to the stray path. And they did. This is a parody book about real life working industry where you work to earn the right to work, with a rather unique mc, Illanoir the Liberator, that is literally if Giancarlo from Far Cry 6 commercial is an adorable and unhinged elf with 1000% suppressed anguish and anger that levels up Doom Eternal gameplay. Although he haven't gone commando with all of those built up hatred against his own current corrupted and messed up kin, the amount of hints that tells that "he will and he will go ham for the sake of being ham" is loud and clear. The author seems to be taking the no-haste and methodical writing path with satire, irony, and comedy thrown time to time, but the story is overall packed with intense action that is simple and witty dialogue to make the pace enjoyable. World building is very clear and comprehensible so for, even though it is still low on chapter, the very reason I'm here to make a justified review to begin with. Good stuff. Imma wait till it have 50 or 100 ish chapter for another review. "Tax law is more lax on planet unseen. And in space, no one can hear the machines." 100 out of 100

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Yokoyokai

A unique story that takes multiple genre and fitting all of them into one possibly -massive intricate world that is build upon corruption and oppression.

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Makotobut_diff

As a beta reader for Ch. 1, I would say that this book has potential. and I really enjoy reading this book because of TRAP. 🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳🕳

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Sad_Armadillo

Who's continuing the book? Please I would like to know.

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