章節 1: Vision
The red sky was raining blood as the jet black cloud grew stronger and stronger with different colored lightning bolts hitting the ground that was muddy and blackened by blood littered with thousand upon thousand of body's massacred.
A enormous monstrous shadowy abomination was choking a young woman wearing plate armor that was severely damaged, she was gasping for air stabbing the beasts arm with her weapon then as a loud snaps roars across the open battlefield the woman lifeless body hits the ground, the entity moves to grabs the last living person
there was a man with black wearing a light breastplate lifting him up and the man see's a person sitting on top of the monster heads wearing a solid black faceless mask with a single white eye glowing bright through with it and starts marking a sinister snicker. "I told you it was only a matter of time, You keep on lying to your pathetic self because you won't accept that your are John!"
Before the masked man could speak any further a bright light beams down, as John recovers his sight he looked down to see he's been impaled by a gigantic golden sword piercing the beasts neck with the rest of the sword in John gut with the masked man nowhere to be seen.
An angelic man with 6 golden wings wearing in full gold red armor with standing on the hilt of the sword monster, he had the appearances of a masked angel driving
further and further with the heel of his foot, the moment that the man spoke the sound of the voice that struck terror in John. "You are a disappointment, society will never accept you, not even your own father cares." The man pushes the rest of the spear with his foot, going through the monsters neck while slamming John into to the ground with the rest of the sword burred in the mud& blood the man reappears right in front of him. "The next time I see you with that, it will be much worse and I will show no mercy or remorse."
The man target was
violently coughing large amounts of blood and John speaks out in a weaken voice. "Why do you hate me out of all people Enoch?" His body was die the lack of blood hanging on nothing but a thread from the pain of the spear.
The man opens his hand and a flaming golden sword mineralize in his hand and answers his question. "Cause you're the enemy to Yahweh." Stabbings john with no hesitation, passing though the gap of his rib piecing both his heart and lungs, before John drew his final breath Enochlooks and says. "Him and his son and I will be watching you."
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MG_slayer
MG_slayer Note: I’m rewriting the story a little, am unfinished chapter was accidentally released.
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