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EDEN'S Impact : Reckoning of the Shadows

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作者: McFoster

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"In a world where virtual reality reigns supreme, one man faces an impossible choice: to surrender his humanity to an all-encompassing VRMMORPG in the hope of saving his world. As he ventures deeper, the lines between virtual and real begin to blur, and every decision pulls him further from the life he once knew. Will his sacrifice be the key to a brighter future—or the end of everything he holds dear?"

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4.76

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ELF_QUEEN

First chapter got me hooked very nice pacing and character development... highly recommend for those who love adventure troupes.

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Noveleye

A good take on the game genre. An interesting game novel. I like the idea, a really dope stuff but I think the work in this work should be the dialogue. Overall it's really interesting.

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Yama2
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This book is what I will call hypnotic it keeps you trapped in this world of epic battles and never ending adventure. check this book if you want to be hypnotized

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immortal_tang_san

Beautiful Genre! Unique Plot! Good Pacing, Interesting Characters & Amazing Story😍

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zachycards

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

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Amarachi_Jacinta

Beautiful Genre. The story is well written

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RyztarInk

Can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded 😁

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Legendary_Arts

a well written novel with pure view of adventure in it

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Chloethebarbarian

Its attention-drawing storytelling is great, the characters are comedic with the story unfolding it will be amazing, keep going [img=Feeling it]

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Vine_Sunday

Okay... what did the author just do to me? Every chapter seems to draw you in further. It's legit hypnosis, and I've been hypnotized. I'm coming back here for another review, when I'm ball's deep in.

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Sumi_Suzy

Futuristic Idea with a great story development. interested to read how the story progress

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Sakakibara9300

I love how he’s just going on a blowing minds❤️❤️❤️❤️ very well written will continue

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loe_ells

This is a really nice book. I'm waiting for more updates.

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AlexNick

Interesting novel. I really got hooked just by reading some few chapters. Really captivated and interesting . Keep updating more chapters 😁

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Sh4dd0ww

Really good plot, so far the story is well written and not rushed. I wanna see this author go places with this novel

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Egbuna_Favour

Keep it up Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] The first few chapters got me hooked and mad [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Tom_Jerry_3982

Eden's Impact: Reckoning of the Shadows" is an ambitious and imaginative story that attempts to blend high-stakes fantasy with VRMMORPG elements. The premise—a duel to determine the fate of two worlds—is unique, and concepts like the "glitch system" and the dynamics between Mammon, Gaius, and Lady Fate show promise for deeper exploration. The world-building is creative and adds a refreshing twist to the genre. However, the execution leaves room for improvement. The dialogue often feels overly dramatic and unnatural, making it hard to fully connect with the characters. The pacing, especially in the prologue, is rushed, delivering too much information too quickly without proper emotional buildup. Additionally, there are numerous grammatical and typographical errors, such as inconsistent capitalization and awkward phrasing, which disrupt the reading experience. With better pacing, more natural dialogue, and tighter editing, this story has the potential to be a standout in the genre. For now, it’s a rough gem with creative ambition and worth checking out for fans of experimental fantasy. I’m curious to see how it develops in the future.

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iminchoo

The story is captivating, with well-paced progression that keeps the reader engaged from start to finish. Its steady development sustains interest throughout, making it a refreshing addition to the genre. Great job author—keep it up! ;)

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I_Eat_Stardust

Nice developing of the characters. I just love the way you build up images along with engaging dialogues. Half- elf that's quite new to me. Don't wanna spoil anymore. Just read it.

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Don_Campbell

Eden's Legacy is a thrilling dive into the world of virtual reality, blending high-stakes action with personal growth. Miles Levine, a passionate gamer, finds himself drawn into a VRMMORPG where his choices shape not just his character but the fate of two worlds. While the pacing occasionally slows with detail, the book is an engaging and fun read, especially for fans of Ready Player One or Sword Art Online.

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