/ Anime & Comics / DXD: The Retired Hero
摘要
Reincarnation wasn't new to him.
He was once an excited teen, ready to save the world from the demon king, now he was a veteran, a man that had gone through countless wars and came out as a victor, a man that mastered countless forms of battle.
Somewhere along the way, saving the world became a chore, so he discarded the sword and took up magic for the next few dozen lifetimes.
Magic was there whenever he was sent to another world, his body, on the other hand, needed work, so he made sure to study the magic of every world he visited, Holy, dark, demonic, water, lightning, the list went on.
So... Now, this man had one question...
Why not retire?
Being born as a devil ensured that he lived for a long, long time.
And so the vacation of a tired man seeking peace and a little amusement started.
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I own nothing, just the OC.
This will be a stress relief since moving out for college is stupidly complicated.
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Seems like it has a lot of potential, and even though I read only 1 chapter it looks like it’ll be fun to read. Also the grammar……………………… 8=D
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Honestly, I'm going to keep this short and sweet, Character interaction 9/10 I can see this happening in the manga/anime, Humor 10/10 I love it, Story Progression 8/10 Invested in how events will play out with this new ringer added to the mix, Grammer 7/10 Readable with some clear mistake that can be fixed but doesn't take away from the story itself.
this one has really good potential. author-San should change POV from time to time(not always but occasionally) also plz don't give him sacred gear. I kinda hope that he tells serafall about his past lives and then both of them can go troll people
Have a great potential hope you won't drop this story my friend. Remember never gonna give you up, Never gonna let you down. Never gonna run around and eat pizza
Im gonna ask the question which probably many people are wondering, is this a harem? pls no........................................