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摘要
Ichijou Ryu, eldest son of the Shuei Clan Yakuza and older brother of Ichijou Raku, finds himself with memories of a past life. Now he connects this new world of his as a mash-up universe of DxD. A Soul System awakens with him, giving him a unique way to power up in the danger-filled world. He will need to get it together as the balance of each power keeps tipping. What challenges await him? How strong are the threats? Will he be able to cope with the sheer inconvenience of spontaneously transporting/reincarnating/transmigrating into different worlds to answer a soul call? How strong will he become? How long will the chapters be for that world before going back to his main?
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The MC may be a reincarnated soul, but because I wanted him to fully integrate himself into that world, he retains the personality he cultivated in the world. I'm not some 4D chess kinda dude, so the antagonists and all those cunning people in said animes will maybe fall short so I'll try my best.
He will obviously have bullshit luck and stuff.
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Alright, so critique is welcome. Please Comment as well.
I'll do my best to upload. It might be looking like either 3 or 4 chapters a week, that's the goal. 2 would be the minimum.
If you wanna join my discord, here it is:
https://discord.gg/fDkpHrbP
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I do not claim ownership or credit of any of the works here or their characters, only My OCs, so go support the authors of those light novels/manga. I also do not claim ownership of the art for the cover page, lmk if you find them.
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Okay, I'm not going to get into too much detail on this novel because I don't want to spoil it for people, but I'm on chapter 10. Man, does this guy love collecting female leads. There are about 20—I'm not sure, I lost count, maybe more, maybe less. Oh man, this story feels fun to read, but this kid is collecting women left and right, and he's only 9 years old so far. There is no time skip, and it's getting on my nerves now.
It is a decent story structure and word wise, but it is just a more refined version of sign in system stories present in faloo novels. The protagonist is very OP but doesn't have the right mindset to use his powers efficiently. He also doesn't abuse the gacha even though it keeps on giving more points than he puts in. All he needed to do was summon until he had all of the most busted abilities the author could imagine. I especially can not forgive it when there is no limit on summoning. Anyways, if you like a self-critical, OP, basic thinking, and unconscious harem aura protagonist, then this is the novel for you.
The Harem aspect straight up ruins this entire story. Mc becomes OP (kinda) straight away but instead of training to keep his family safe or learning more in-depth about the supernatural and mixed up worlds he’s just picking up children (Disgusting Pedo 🤮) He gets all these good items from Gacha and doesn’t use any cause he’s too busy playing with children it’s honestly disgusting and ruins the entire story
I'm giving this rating even without reading the story because it's unfair for the mongoloid to give one star as a review just because it's a harem story, the guy is literally complaining about the guy writing a harem fanfic in a story whose main objective of the original protagonist is to create a harem in a universe where harem is a widely accepted thing, the level of this mongoloid is very high.
I love how the story is going on I hope it gets to 100 chapters.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is very interesting but unfortunately it is rarely updated ..........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,.
Arigato author san ...keep up the amazing work [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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So, it has come to my attention that a shameless review by the author is a custom. Well here it is, though I couldn't bring myself to give the stability 5 stars. But! Im pumped for this story.... I just gotta write it....