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Dungeon Architect: Rebuilding the God's game

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作者: Tonye43

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In a world where dungeons are the lifeblood of power and peril, Seth, the Dungeon Architect, awakens with nothing but an ancient core and his wits.

Thrust into a deadly game of gods and mortals and Bound by duty, he designs and oversees the dungeon as its master until it matures, wielding his cunning to outsmart adventurers and safeguard its secrets.

Nevertheless, As other secrets unravel and foes close in, can he rise to become a legend
or will ambition crush him?

A tale of cunning, magic, and the ultimate test of strategy and
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Also, I want to say to my readers that I'm not perfect, this is my first novel and there'll be errors but feel free to say your mind; I'm open to correction, even more to criticism.
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    Xnet4
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    everything was not bad until the woman and the child appeared. Why did he save them? Okay, he would have made an agreement and then stabbed me in the back, but no, he kept them if they disappear later, then I will put 5 stars

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    TheHighElite

    Everything about this novel just feels rushed? characters feel soul-less and so far not much of anything! has been explained or even developed right it feels just dead and mind numbing to read tho I'm also at the very start of this novel so I'll change my review if it gets better however I highly recommend the author revises or edits the first few chapters at least because so far it has not been easy for me to enjoy or even get into at all to read this feels like doing math homework In my personal opinion the premise while similar to alot of other novels is still semi unique in its own way so there's potential here author tldr do better Author and add a soul to this!!

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