/ Book&Literature / Dudley Dursley and the Diabolical Do-Over (Harry Potter)
Dudley Dursley and the Diabolical Do-Over (Harry Potter)
4.13 (26 評分)
摘要
In which Dudley Dursley is given a chance to go back and have his way with the wizarding world. Of course he's going to take it.
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
26評論
4.13
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Just giving the author some support, it’s the first time seeing a Harry Potter fanfic where the mc is Dudley, so keep going
honestly with taking Harry's magic it kind of ruined it for me since there's no real reason reason the antagonism behind everything at that point. then again very few potterverse fan fics ever turn out well for one reason or another so I'll go back tomeaiting on dxd fan fics or something
Mc idiot [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Don't. Just don't.
So 3 years for Dudley so far... or rather 3 books. An amusing thing is that this is basically a Return/Rebirth type story with a "villain" type who is suppressing the original "hero protagonist", a fanon harem master Harry Potter.
DO NOT READ ITS DISGUSTING AUTHOR COULD BE A PEDO OR HE WILL GROW IN TO ONE THE WAY THIS STORY IS WRITTEN. THIS SHOULD BE DELETED.
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
揭示劇透 [img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
揭示劇透
Good[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
WARNING Read first chapter, all. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far. Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.
[img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
揭示劇透 Continue pls [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Uffff story great [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Keep updating plzz *********"*****************************************************************************************************************
So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl. Excited for more. So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl.So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl.
was interesting at the start than he kinda turns into a degenerate unintelligent every holes a goal kinda thing and the last chapter just kinda ruined it for me not a fan that your a cuck 4/10 some people enjoy that stuff tho so to eaches own