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Its my work so i'll obv give a good rating.//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
After reading 3 chapters I'm speechless to say the least the whole story is so darn confusing i don't even know what's going on any more? Mc just went from weak to OP with the Korean guy system gift then from op to weak again? Fake his death get caught train the Unholy female version of Sasuke and Naruto then fight danzo to death? I'm speechless i really am......
i like this story so i will give this a five star!! writing is hard and long chapters are hard too!! i like the concept of this story too and i am happy that this won't be a harem. thank you
It's hard to write a review of a story that has only three chapters at the moment. But I'm going to try anyway. For the Writing quality I'll give 5 stars. The writing is above average for what you see here on Webnovel. There aren't a lot of grammar mistakes/typo's. So the story is easy to follow. For the stability of updates I'll also give 5 stars. The author updates daily from what I've seen. Lets see if he can keep it up... For the story development I'll have to give 3 stars. This is mostly because of the few chapters that are out at the moment. A lot has happened in the chapters. And we're not even 10 chapters in. For Character Design I'll give 4 stars. The author has chosen to give the main character an interesting personality. There already has been some character development and we are only 3 chapters in. For the World Background I'll have to give 5 stars. The first world of the story is Naruto, a good choice since you can do a lot in it. The author decided to change the Naruto world we know. Its different. And if this continues, I can't wait to see what he'll do in other worlds! All in All it's a story written by someone that seems to enjoy what he's doing. And you notice that while reading the story. I'm looking forward to see what he'll do next!
So im reaching close to chapter 50, and figured i should give another review. I read the entire thing end have to say, the first world is a bit too short. I think I’m slowly getting better at writing so let me know what you. Feedback is important. There are more worlds coming btw, so this fanfic is nowhere near done.
The R@pe scenes kinda ruined it for me tbh, like I get it, Comedy and all but still. And just because your maidenless does not mean the mc should be too. Idk man I feel annoyed with this story. Other then that it was alright ig
First few chapters are meh…..it gets better;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;Itsigsigzigzgizigzgjzjgzigzigzgi
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It’s a bloody mess and a half, everything is everywhere and nowhere all at the same time. Half the time things just don’t make sense and the other half is constantly on fire…