摘要
At the edges of the World of Vunreon lies the skeleton of a Dragon. A being once revered by many titels, such as God of Dragons, the first Dragon, Ruler of Space and Time and master of the Void, he was now nothing more than a imposing sight.
Though unbeknownst to his slayers, his soul that they shattered didn't fully die. Instead its countless shards dispersed across time and space, reincarnating each into a mortal coil. When their lives came to an end, they slowly joined back together.
After countless millennia, the last of these lives came to an end and thus his soul awoke once more.
Whole again but only a soul without a body, he has to start anew on his path to once more stand at the peak of creation.
This is my first novel and english is not my first language, so criticism and corrections are always welcome.
I do not own the cover
標籤
-- 推薦票
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寫檢討
It's actually quite good, I'm enjoying the read, I just have a little problem, the description of the characters, especially the women or members of the harem, we don't know if they are tall, short, if they have big, modest or small breasts, yes they have curves, a huge butt, toned, heart shaped, eye color, absolutely none of that has been mentioned, we don't even know if Allaire has wolf ears or tail or anything like that. I'm in chapter 15 btw, I hope and is changed that later, otherwise it would be a problem, if you can't describe them, then at least put a reference image in some auxiliary chapter
Really enjoying this book and am looking forward to more chapters