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摘要
A boy got reincarnated as goku.
Warning this is a wish fulfilment story.
Although the main character will not be busted at the beginning he will be the fourth strongest character by the end of the story(behind two Zeno and Grand priest)
Slow harem. Most characters will not have a romantic interaction until they have at least 30 chapters of screen time with a few exceptions.R18 chapters are absent until goku reaches the age of 16 in the story (age of consent in my area)
Not I do not own the art. If the artist wants to take it down just notify me in the comments. Much appreciated.
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寫檢討
A female character in Dragon Ball who would like to propose to be the protagonist's harem : Android 18 , Android 21 (good and evil) , Angela , Miss Hamilton , Annin , Bikini (mother of Tights and Bulma) , Tights ( Bulma's older sister) , Bulma , Caulifla , Caway , Cheelai , Chi-Chi , Cocotte . Colonel Violet . Erasa , Fasha , Hasky , Heles , Kale , Kusu , Launch , Mai , Marcarita , Maron (Krillin's ex-girlfriend) , Miss Piiza , Nain , Princess Snake , Ranfan , Miss Hamilton (The English teacher at the school at Gohan went to study during the Majin Buu Saga.) , Vados , Videl , Yurin , Zangya
I read only because i thought Bulma was a love interest but I'm at chap 93 and Bulma just search for a bf and want to bang yamcha so ciao...
the grammar is bad, i quit after reading the first few paragraphs. Don't get me wrong, its certainly readable. His mistakes are in general small but because they are so small and so easily fixed, it annoys me even more. The mistakes are small but extremely numerous. to explain my rating. If one aspect of this story is bad enough to convince me to quit, then all other aspects, no matter how great, are irrelevant. What is the point of a great backstory or plot if your grammar annoys me to a point, that i would never manage to read it. of course this means, that if you don't mind the grammar,then this might be a great story for you.
I tried to read the first 2 chapters, I really did. In the first chapter, there were some mistakes with spelling and grammar but I could ignore it if I focused a bit, sadly, in the second chapter it was so much worse! I couldn't even finish it and si Goku is one of my favorites!
the character's are pale shadow's of canon, the author's oc mc act's smart but is really stupid. some spelling mistake's are understandable. author doesn't know how character growth work's, doesn't stray to far from canon but change's enough during the encounter's to not make it to much of a problem. author has trouble with sticking with character personality's for his oc mc, keep's swapping from prideful saiyan to gentlemen from the 21ist era and back again. i mean if he has watched the show and actually understood most thing's. why would he even bother wishing to bring back a planet of bloodthirsty warrior's that he is in no position to control for them not to commit untold misery till he was able to put them under his thumb. all in all the story was ruined by the author's inability to think through his plot before posting the chapter's.
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The MC is more of a side character in this fic. Literally everyone is stronger than him. The worst part of this fic is the 500 word chapters.
Welll.... i gave it a try... i really did... but the grammar is worse than google translation. Author dosnt knows the correct verbs tenses of in everything. I recommend he uses Grammatically.
It's very very like very Boring. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's bad, just read a few chapters and you'll understand but in summary it's wattpad writers level bad. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
I think the story is very beautiful but the chapters are a bit short, mc is different from the classic goku and does not take muten as a master but goes to baba and trains magic training every day against his subordinates, (I must say that it is a nice novelty), mc knows the canon and already knows how to train as a sayan so he becomes stronger easily compared to the canon because he already knows what to train, he uses magic and ki (the magic uses the one from dragonball and not an invented one like in the other db stories), innovative ideas in short a different goku, I hope that the author returns and continues this story that has a lot of potential Also i see many people use 1 star just because of grammar, and my answere is: this is webnovel what u expect
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I dont want to review this........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
the first 5 chapters seem a bit rushed, but I'm gonna leave this reviews as a sign of interest on this story, and where it can go. I hope you don't drop this any time soon.
ok I made it to chp48 before I dropped this. This guy thinks too much and doesn't have the same Chemistry as Goku nor ambitious enough to think outside the box to grow stronger so he goes with magic...
Yeah I couldn’t continue reading for so many reasons but just know it’s yet another trash dragon ball story lol also Bulma is bait as the story photo
i should trust the bad review.. this SI goku think he smart but actually a big dumb. and only think a shortcut. it is my opinion, but i dont like mc character.
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
it's good ............................................................................................................................................
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I will say no more so as not to hurt your feelings .......................................................................................................