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I do not have the rights about Douluo Dalu,it's just a fanfict.
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the story is good, but can you fixed the grammar. Maik Holy is a boy don't use word "her" for a boy. I hope that you will not dropped this novel since its good
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My story soo........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Don't know that to say, great story. .......................................................................................................................................................
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