/ Fantasy / Doom Verse
摘要
The wheels of faith are constantly turning, determining the roles of new players in a grand theater. In the "game" known as the Doom verse, players must leave their old identities and bodies in the past. The Doom master, the person behind the Doom verse, is attempting to save the world and has turned it into the ultimate gamble. Whether you die or gain everything depends on your faith. Nothing happens on its own; everything is part of someone's plan.
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hello guys author here. if you read it I really appreciate. its's my first time writing something like this especially its's really hard for me to write on language which isn't my native. please give me your feedbacks. you can ask me here everything you don't understand, and thank you for your attention.
From what I see it's author first job and it's good writing for first time, hope you will get better. I want to see where story is going so don't disappoint in yourself and continue
Best Dark Fantasy ever. Keep up the work my brother