摘要
Accused by his enemies, Tang Yin was led to a dead end and died at the hands of his enemies. Even so, fate gave him a new chance, and his soul traveled to a lower world, where he managed to reincarnate.
His new body had no cultivation and no family either, so he was now a total cripple in an unknown world, with enemies lurking at his door.
Yet, he is the proud Divine Heir, dubbed the 'Divine Son' of the Upper Realm. How could something so simple stop him?
That is why he will forge his own path and rise again, this time by the hand of a mysterious power that belongs exclusively to him.
'Even if I don't understand why I was chosen as Divine Heir, I will create my own path and forge my own power.' He thought.
At the same time, a strange and mysterious system with an attractive power, which it said could help him complete his revenge, appeared before him.
[You must become the Host of the Domination System]
[Do you accept?]
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Review after 500 chaps. The quality improved tremendously, with good developments in every aspect. Good harem, well rounded characters, and engaging interactions. There are no bad outcomes, just fuel for plots, and all the events build up to a wonderful climax. There is mystery, and confusion, but it all gets sorted in the best possible way. There are no true losses, only gains. It was worth reading the novel and following the MC's journey.
The story is okay however the writer is really against giving his character any powers. He is crippled for the first 100 chapters and it feels kinda drawn out. Right as he is about to fix his problems (around chapter 100) and cultivate he loses an arm. The author said it’s to nerf the mc a bit to prevent him from growing strong to fast. The problem is he is a two handed weapon master. All this does is draw the story out and make it boring. I just checked and he doesn’t get his other arm back until chapter 300. That’s absolutely absurd.
Like any Chinese novel, MC's got that hero complex, falls for any cute girl he sees, and acts like a kid who don't know jack about the world (let's say not too bright). And them side characters, they're even worse. Kidnaps the wife (total cliché), That "divine child" (to be one, you gotta be smart), going alone... mmm.
Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
The premise of the story is very interesting. Especially the first chapter was interesting enough. The quality of the writing is good enough. Overall, a good read.
Don't tell me he has 1 wife captive in each of the 11 sects. And he will have to grovel through mud so he can get them back? Maybe some will want to stay as Saintesses or something in those sects too?
Unlike other stories, the writing quality in this one goes down over time instead of going up. I think the author just picked the wrong genre to write tbh, it was a great idea.
Why did u give the name domination system... The hero doesnt dominate at all... Always humilited by side characters not even villains... very slow paced... Hero is very knowledgeable about their world but cant do anything...
Хороше произвидения, легко читается и интересный сюжет, по крайней мере первые 92 нравы которые я смог прочесть! Раз отзыв не может быть меньше 140 слов то я просто буду писать ещё что нибуть)!
Author, could you please tell me when he starts cultivating again? I'm currently on chapter 40, and before I do spend any coins, I would like to know
It was good till he left the village with her. But after it was like blindly following the story with no directions. The info dump was high.I like the story very much from it started till now. But if could clearly show where will the story progresses and reduce Infodumps on full chapters.Personal: Try to think better name for the chapters.
Honestly I like his other book more vampire one. In this novel either mc saves a damsel in distress or goes on making enemies everywhere Dude a horney guy man just got betrayed by his best friend I guess and here he is hosting charity and chasing skirts in this novel only males are antagonists all females are lovely rosey heart fluttering angels seriously these kind of plots I don't like Again progenitor vampire is much much better mc is fixed on his goal not skirts
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Hello, author here. First of all, thank you very much for reading. I sincerely appreciate it very much. Second, 92 free chapters, a total of 150 thousand words available to read totally free. If you have any questions for me, feel free to ask.