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53.84% Divine Comedy of Cultivation / Chapter 14: A new person appears!

章節 14: A new person appears!

Xie Shoushan and Dai Jinhai walked towards an extra mossy spot under some very large trees.

"There's no fire materials..." 

Dai Jinhai always talked in a special way that made it seem awkward if you responded so Xie Shoushan stayed silent. 

As Dai Jinhai walked around the surrounding area to look for fire materials Xie Shoushan sits down with a sigh.

Finally...rest!

Xie Shoushan is rather happy.

"Are you not going to lend a hand? We need fire."

Dai Jinhai needed help in finding materials...but did not say anything?!

Xie Shoushan reluctantly stands up and walked around in circles looking for sticks to put the fire on.

"Nothing.." 

Xie Shoushan looks everywhere but there is nothing!

"Nothing?"

Dai Jinhai emerges from behind a bush, his hands are full of many big sticks and tree branches. He puts them all on the ground. While staying silent he hits a branch a couple times to make a spark them puts the spark on the other wood to make a fire.

"Wow!"

Xie Shoushan is very impressed, so gives a encouraging smile.

Dai Jinhai looks as if he couldn't care less.

"There's a fire now you can rest."

Xie Shoushan sighed in happiness again and lay down on the soft moss. In less than seconds he was fast asleep.

After many hours of joy and rest Xie Shoushan wakes up with a yawn. Bird are outside, chirping like the sound of windchimes. Wait, those aren't birds or windchimes...it is still raining!!

Xie Shoushan is confused because it has now been raining for a very long time. 

And now that Xie Shoushan realizes this he looks around...and around again.

"Dai Jinhai...?" 

Xie Shoushan is surprised.

"Where have you gone?"

"Right here, st*pid."

Xie Shoushan looks around again and is shocked, Dai Jinhai is right behind! How! He just appeared like a cloud!

"What! How did you just appear...are you a cloud?" 

"..."

Dai Jinhai's face gives away the look of disapproval. 

"...I was getting food."

After a long pause Dai Jinhai did eventually respond. He holds up a dead rabbit.

"Aaa!"

Xie Shoushan shields his face with his hands.

"I don't eat that!"

Xie Shoushan never eats wild animals like rabbit, he instead prefers dumplings.

Dai Jinhai shrugs and bites the rabbit.

"No food!"

Xie Shoushan looks sadly as the lack of food comes.

"Where is the closest town?"

"I already told you. If you forgot than that is your own mistake."

"Apologies..."

Xie Shoushan's normally polite ways are getting less used because he is rather tired and this Dai Jinhai man is way to impolite!

Dai Jinhai ate all the rabbit and walked further in the forest. Xie Shoushan runs towards him, extremely hating the idea of getting lost in this eerie raining forest.

"This is quite lonely..."

Xie Shoushan wishes for another person to come on the adventure so that it is less awkward. 

To answer his call there is the crunch of a leaf.

"A sound!"

Xie Shoushan whirls around hoping there is someone kind coming out of the bush ready to join their adventure.

"Ignore it."

"But I can't! What if it's a new person to join in the adventure!"

"Adventure? Barely...it's just a small walk, how st*pid are you?"

Ahhhh, this is the reasons in which Xie Shoushan wishes for someone else to come on this adventure. Dai Jinhai, the angry man, will never stop being angry.

A leaf crunches again and this time both Dai Jinhai and Xie Shoushan look towards the bush.

"Who is it?"

A creature comes out! 

And...

A boar.

"A boar?"

"A boar!!"

Dai Jinhai seems annoyed and keeps on walking.

Xie Shoushan is angry. 

Then, the boar falls down.

The boar was never alive in the first place! Someone had killed the boar! That means the hunter is nearby!

A woman steps from behind the door, she is looking afraid.

"That boar...was scary!"

Her voice was the melody of beauty! She looked beautiful too! Xie Shoushan had hearts in his eyes and was immediately in love. 

"My sincere apologies at believing you were the boar. You are not though?"

The girl saw Xie Shoushan and started to blush. Dai Jinhai sighed and walked away. He did not seem one to care about anything. 

"Join us?"

The girl smiled, her raven black hair seemed like the night but her face was the moon.

"Yes!"


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A new person joins the party!!!!

In my last author's note i said that Dai Jinhai would be a main character, this is slightly false though he will be main character in this arc (maybe more that depends)

but i know he is kinda mean don't worry though he will get nicer, sorry for the mean words i made him say. Soon xie shoushan's politeness will come to him and he'll also be polite.

The new girl who will appear is beautiful in a mystery way, i will not say anything else because of spoilers

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