/ Anime & Comics / Dimensional Store in Glory City
摘要
A mysterious and flashy shop is located in a part of Glory City, what will happen when Nie Li reincarnates and sees the change in his City?
"Professor Shen Xiu, are you Legend rank?"
"Dad, are you by any chance understanding the Law of Fire?"
"Sister, where did you get that sword from?"
"Hey wait, because I'm Black Gold rank"
"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON"
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( I'm really bad at english so i'm using google translate hope it won't be any inconvenience for you)
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Mc is not likable. Firstly he's been b*t*ing about other mc's having systems forgetting that many of them have to work harder than those with non system based cheats due to the authors' bad personalities. Secondly he's immature as he fails to adapt to the rules of cultivation world and acts like an edgelord (after gaining the system). Thirdly he's an open pervert who blatantly oggles at minor girls' cleavage and while honest about it doesn't really make him a likable character. Aside from that the comedic undertone and products as well as reactions of different parties is humorous. Overall a fun and wish fulfillment-ish fanfic with a whiny yet tolerable mc.
Honestly when it comes to MCs it doesn't get any worse than this. every story is an autobiography of the author in some way or another and the vibes given off from this story sure are creepy. pretty sad overall, the story had potential.
MC is bad. Like REALLy bad. Bad not as a villain or anti hero, but as a character. His character is a mixture of base desires and complexes of the author. ALL The story is just a bad fanfiction of a popular story + a tasteless crossover to other titles. There is literally not a single good moment in it. I don't even know what else to write here. It's like describing a rock by the side of the road, except that's the rock you just pulled out of your shoe. I just can't accept the fact that this story has such a high rating. She is absolutely undeserved.
I quit fanfiction at chapter 34, some kind of nonsense began to happen. For some reason, he distributed modern equipment to his former clan, he also took a loan in the system to buy a protection system, he didn’t understand at all why he did it. Seriously tractor, dam, harvester, drip irrigation system and so on. what the heck, how are they supposed to use it? . I do not understand why in the system you can buy all this at all. The auction is generally nonsense, how can you sell a military complex with personnel, what nonsense. The Black Panther suit allows you to fight a demigod, what? If before chapter 30 I basically liked everything, now I don’t know what to expect next. MC has become a slave to the system. Before chapter 30 I give it 9/10, after 4/10.
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I really like this story, although the plot has some gaps, you are forgiven for not being many worthwhile TDG Fanfiction
The novel isn’t poorly written, it is easily readable bar the few genders-mishaps. I actually liked the whole premise of the novel in the beginning, it had the potential to go pretty far, there is a few teething issues, mainly the MC’s personality. Unfortunately In 50 chapters it’s slowly delved into a mangled mess, a “patchwork” novel of random nonsense added from various other worlds and modern day. The future is not looking too bright, especially with the upcoming auction and the hunter guild’s so called missions and treasures. With everything that has been introduced or currently mentioned that will be introduced in the future, the author will have serious problems later on when it comes to power scaling. Strongly dislike the other world missions where the MC is not involved and after reading a handful of chapters with the MC barely appearing you begin to wonder if the focus is going to shift to everone but the actual MC. It’s a shame for what could of been, it was an interesting idea ruind by either being too ambitious or the author wanting quick results. Though not in the reamls of trash novel, there are just too many things that force me to take a more “wait and see” approach. Maybe I will come back when there is more chapters and reviews. Wish you all the best.
揭示劇透 Great fanfiction, I haven't seen a good novel about TDG for a long time, but I haven't seen a good novel about the store at all. Liked the MC, not stupid, not trying to hide that he is a pervert, not a Japanese oyash or a Chinese cultivator. The only negative is that there are few chapters and the frequency of updates is not bad, but I would like it to be faster.
A ver cómo seguirá de aquí en adelante. Me parece interesante su idea de poner el mundo patas arriba con sus ventas. Realmente tengo curiosidad para saber hasta donde piensas subir el nivel de cultivo de la ciudad Gloría. Ten en cuenta que en esta novela hay elixires y frutas que te pueden subir hasta el Nivel de Ancestro o Deidad sin esfuerzo. Y sin hablar de los núcleos que producen piedras espirituales.
Very good novel, the system is typical of a store because of the novelty is that it is TGD and I would like it to explore other places that the novel could not since it improved a lot. There are holes in the plot but it is passable (Google translate)
Good novel 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽#######################################################################################################################################
Writing quality is good... but the MC is an actual Pedo. Like, it's not even hidden. He's just an actual creep. Not a good setting for a protagonist. That kind of wish fulfillment is better off kept to yourself rather than set out for the world to see. If he lusted after an older woman, it would be a lot easier to overlook, but this is actually criminal. If that doesn't stop you, then go ahead and read, I guess.
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Here the author, of course I will rate my story with the best☺️☺️☺️☺️. I hope you like it, remember to support me on Patreon, it inspires me to create better