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1,000 Years ago, Earth was destroyed. 200 Years later, mankind migrated to Planet Genesis, a planet filled with horrifying monsters. The only way to survive is to evolve! Evolve your genes and become a superhuman!
Marvin is the 3rd child of Thunder Blade Aristocrat Family. With E Grade Gene Quality, he is ranked in the bottom of the society of Practitioners.
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Is this novel gonna be long, or just a short novel for the contest's sake? Also i agree, make the MC less dense. In ur other novel he is like the typical saiyan, all muscle, very little brain.
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I hope you'll make him more romantic like that guys said overthr. >.<!! Kalan is really dense,, and I hate it when he try to dump Bulma! but still I really like your novel... :D!!
Can’t wait for more stories from you I love your main work and the hair one does deserve more love and I know I’m gonna like this story as well
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Its pretty meh, not as good as some of they other works. But even those are dropping in quality. Didn't find it too engaging or anything to draw me into the plot or story. Maybe it'll get better but judging from the recent release of his other works I don't have high hopes.
Try to make the mc a more romantic man pleased. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . According to your last work he was sorta dense, let me rephrase it REALLY DENSE