/ Anime & Comics / Devil Fruit System in MHA
摘要
After an untimely death during a robbery, engineer Kael Ross wakes up in the surreal afterlife of Transcendence Inc., where he learns he has been assigned to the God of Shut-ins, Hibiki Komori. Gifted a unique system, the ability to make "Devil Fruits" from One Piece, Will he be able to change the world of My Hero Academia?
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Obligatory author review here- this work is something I've had tumbling around in my brain for two reasons. I want to see more Devil Fruits, and I find myself unhappy with the way MHA has progressed.
The setup with "God Reincarnation Inc." stuff is interesting, but it feels like it goes on too long and doesn’t add much to the main plot. Since it doesn’t seem to impact the story later, it might be worth shortening or summarizing this section. Jumping right into the protagonist’s arrival in the new world with their powers could hook readers faster and keep the pacing tight. Instead of having all the setup in the beginning, genrelly this lengthy introudctions kinda just becomes boring, hell might be wrong but 99% of fanfics that does this introoduction never has any payoff anyway and made me loose intrest in reading more. Good luck
I need more :< I read it in one sitting now i shall wait for more chaps it was a good read very good grammer and world building and it has comedy would recommend a read.
It feels very ai heavy once the mc gets to mha and nothing really is happening rn as of chapter 17.