/ Sci-fi / Desire of Immortality
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A ruthless businessman with a desire to live forever proceeds to inject himself with a serum when backed into a corner. He becomes a mindless monster that is soon killed by a nuclear missile is sent to the void as punishment for his actions. Eventually he would escape and transmigrate in a new world. This is a story of a man who desires power and Immortality and will do anything to achieve it.
Inspired by Star Wars, Warhammer 40k and Stellaris.
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Yo guy its the author here shamelessly putting a five star review on my novel. I'm here to let you guys know that I am a newbie author so my story may not be that great but do tell on what I can do to improve. The fight scenes is where I'm most likely going to be bad . Overall, pls enjoy.
Great work tho improvements are needed in certain areas it is not bad and really entertaining
Very good, especially considering the author is a beginner writer. The first few chapters might put a lot of you off, but don't worry, by the third chapter it's pretty much completely fine. Additionally, I recommend the author take his time to describe the scenes and characters, there is no need to rush. Seeing a lot of potential here and I will definitely be keeping an eye out for this novel in the future!