摘要
[Initializing Harem System of the Demonic Dragon God]
"Damn! I was right!"
He received the greatest gift of all, a System!
A world of cultivation, where the strongest rule! The man took the place of Strax Vorah, a noble abandoned by his family that worships the Sword.
With an insane desire to become the strongest of all, he now wants to have the most powerful wives!
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Additional tags: Fantasy - Adventure - Action - Romance - Harem - R18 - No NTR - No Yuri - Weak to Strong - Bloodlines - Evolution
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This is a really difficult review. The pace is fast. Action is good. Snu-Snu is good. A harem story that advances quickly. World development is almost nonexistent (I am at chap 81 right now, the limit of premium chapters up yo date). And there is a System by which, supposedly, the MC goes from really really weak to the strongest being. But here is where the difficulties begin. The System makes no sense. The strengthening mechanism is vague at best. Cultivation doesn't mean anything either. MC strength is measured in levels, but we can 't compare it with anyone. The System messages and interventions are the worst, since they don't provide any information at all. Mana, cultivation, levels none of that matters because there is no comprehensive structure behind them. We know they are there, but the author never bothered to explain. Maybe even he doesn't know how things work. I suspect he doesn't even care. Also, there are a few inconsistencies that are irksome, because they are important. All is piling up. The Author wants to tell his story and he won't let something as silly as logic and making bloody sense to interfere.
good story but just dont repeat the gender bender thing like you did with another of your novel. you are such a talent interm of writing fun story learn from your mistakes bro i can see you rise all the way to the top
I love this author so, even tho, I'm not into system novels, I will surely read it, and this review is just to support Katt. When I have read a good amount of chaps, I can make a complete review.
Samira is the best wife, anyone who disagrees is wrong! Look, what a perfect woman! jokes aside, I came from the main novel, honestly the quality is very similar despite finding some chapters short, I recommend reading it, it's very simple and fun
In my opinion for author I think it can be improved ( by balancing the cultivation and the romance/harem)
This is the first novel I've read, I don't have much to say, I just want to help the author in any way I can <3 Keep writing, you'll go far! I don't like Beatrice... but... Samira is the best wife, regardless of the next ones!
I haven't been able to read the premium chapters yet, but I loved the beginning despite finding the +18 scenes a little confusing, but I hope the author improves. If you like this one, I recommend going for the author's main novel, it's very good and the quality is the same!
the novel is very good, although the first wife is a little boring, I hope she is developed. I recommend everyone to read
I really love this book and can't wait to see how the story unfolds. [img=recommend]
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Im not going to lie but I think the description of the book needs some work!!! Honestly if it had a better intro I would def read this as long as the the description was a really good... I mean like now its ok but if u THE AUTHOR improve on it it will be way better!! but thats just me and I will get around to reading it or nor when I have the chance!
Hi Hi! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know it well! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to satisfy your doubts! Also, enjoy this work! I make them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thanks for reading!