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摘要
This Fanfic was made by Twubs you can find him at
https://m.webnovel.com/profile/4315865610?appId=10
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5382281/
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11評論
4.35
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
When i found this story i wasn’t sure what to expect. Although i’m a little confused about the main character backstory (like who he was before getting into Hadvar’s body), the way the author develops the character helps us get a good idea of who he was or at least what he used to do. I’m also quite happy that Hadvar, seems to actually try to live the life he currently have in a realistic way. (Which is very different than most stories around here, who usually follow a delusional main lead who is always searching to see what is underneath the next skirt). So overall im really happy about the story. l’ll add this to my library and maybe give another review when the story progresses further.
This was really good, at least so far, definitely much better then most fanfics both on this site and not. The author did say in the intro that this was not original and had permission to be uploaded.
No big issues with the grammatical side. The biggest demerit is the very slow update speed. However the length of each chapter makes up for this. Great Story.
So far the book is quite good and I’m expecting great things. Give it a try you’ll enjoy it.
this is amazing i just wanted to say that as some people think there work isnt apriceated so i wanted to write this review to let you know i apriceat this amazing creation the fact you went so of the beaten path was a balsy move that for what i have seen has worked out and id love to see more remeber perfection dosent exist so just do your best. oh and ps have a nice day :D
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Few are the first that are related to the Elder scrolls and have a system and fewer are those who work out truly this is a really good Novel, Keep up bro.
you're pretty much copying and pasting his content here. I get that this is a Chinese site, and as the chinese always do, they copy other peoples work, you don't have to do it yourself. write something original for once man!